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In The Arms Of Kalahira

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By MaddyField   |   
© 2012 - 2020 MaddyField
Art by me (Maddy Field)
Raven Shepard belongs to me
Thane Krios, Commander Shepard, Mass Effect © Bioware

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1748x1200px 2.28 MB
Adobe Photoshop CS6 (13.020111012.m.258 2011/10/12:21:00:00) (Windows)
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I am a big Thane and Shep fan. I have seen several art pieces on this topic and I come across few like these so I gave four stars on the originality on that point. Your Vision for this piece is simple yet has mass effect however that effect is lessened by the following. I find the watercolor effect on Thane and Shep lovey. However the technique used on the prayer words is a poor choice I think. Because the colors over power the outline text. Solid or neutral colored text would be a better choice. I wear glasses I found that I was straining to read the words till I gave up out right. The Colors wash out the words, yes I am aware that I am repeating that fact. I repeat it because it is the main reason I was compelled to give a critique. The hands are also outlined in a hard color the upper hand in the sunset, I almost didn't realize it was a hand because the main bulk of the hand blends with the landscape. I think it could be improved by either making the hands smaller or making them transparent. If you have any questions on my Critique I would be pleased to answer them for you.
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:iconcryforeverplz: ALL MY TEARS