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Pseudo Ace

By Maan11j
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This is my entry to DeviantArt's contest, Cute Monsters.

The quote was suggested to me by my friend ~ShinigamiNeko-Richie
I've been having such a bad art block, and I couldn't come up with one. I owe such a great quote to him.
He's new in DA btw, so how about a welcome for him :D?
He is the BEST writter I know :D! Cause I'd actually read 'em ehehe...

Quote: "Come and Play with me... And let's have a Bloody Bath."

Time spent: Almost a day...

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

i love the shirt and i think it is good but i think you can make it great by making either the creature on the front less detailed or makeing the one on the front more detailed because they both look good but the don't look like the go together. Also the word choice on the back dosnt flow right but i like the message so if you decide to listen to me just change the wording not what it is talking about. there is also a blank spot on the t-shrit that is detracting from the overall art maybe you could add something or make the art tall/bigger or move the art and the word like 3 inches or so up. i love the over all message and i think it is good but i think this will make it better.
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I thought the ranking should be higher. It's should be better than that
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im not good at ratings i didn't know what impact realy means and i didn't want to just go i liked it and put a perfect all 5's but honestly i like the shirt
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Thank you <3 ~
Yeah, I have been debating myself on going for a 2D look for the first one, especially since it is going to be printed in the T-shirt. I would possibly end up changing it sometime soon :D.
Also, yes the quote was shortened, it was longer, it just doesn't fit in.. -shot-
"Come and play with me!! and let's end it with a blood bath." --Richie

Thank you so much for the critique, I will definitely try to incorporate what you told me here.
Thank you!!!
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Congrats on your design making it to the semi-finals! :D
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Reminds me of Soul Eater o.O
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yes. Just the insane shadow and all XD Like Crona's shadow o.O

Love nonetheless! :D
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ohh I haven't read or watched Soul Eater so I dunno xD ehehe..
I see I see xD
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Oh! X3 One of my favorite anime lol :3 Sorry~ It was just one thing I had to point out xD
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aaaawww it's adorable! both of them.
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Congratulations on being a semi-finalist! :la: :thumbsup: :)
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Congratulations on getting to the semi-finalists~! 8D
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Awwww, soooooo sweet and very cute :D
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so many amazing designs. very hard to pick favorites.
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very nice!! please vote for my Lillo too! :D
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nice character
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The black one is so nice, voted
and great for posting them separately

Check my monsters:
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cute yet kinda creepy... but i like it! :)
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please vote fore me:
all votes will be returned!! :)
thanks :p
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