Late reply is horribly...horribly late I apologize for that D|"
No thank you so much for the critique, this was my first one and by far the best one so far. I totally agree with you, especially with the boobs and her arm. I'm just...so bad at boobs, I've had more than one comment on them being saggy D'| But I've actually been keeping the water balloon idea in mind (idk why it stuck with me xD)
I think I was going to do something else with her legs but then I changed it last minute...really idk anymore but I seem to have a problem with over-extending legs. I will have to go read the whole article (I'm so lazy D| ), but from the images it looks quit good ^^
Again thank you, every point you made was specific and helpful and it was incredibly helpful. If you ever have the urge to critique me again, go for it