I liked this one more. Her hand that's covering her (flaming?) eye, (but I don't think that smallest flame need to be there - I think it'd do better without it).
It's well placed, her hand, as it reaches for her eye. You've drawn her clothes very well too - I really liked her pants. Or jeans - it's nearly black color and the gray belt - it really fits, also along with her (gun?). Her body composition is also very well drawn, and is that a bra I'm seeing?
One more thing that I noticed, is her right eyebrow - it doesn't seem right with me, but I understand you want both the eye and the eyebrow to be in a more "powerful" black color unlike the eye whose color is a little faint becuase of the fire. And are the eyes meant to be that different? Is it because one is aflame?
I'm sorry I'm not that knowledgable about this character - but I can at least tell you've done a fine job. Favourited, and I'll be sure to look through your other drawings.