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Thanks you for sharing your work. You did a nice job using dark and light tones and blending. II like how some lines are left unblended but i wish you had left some lines less blended in the hair to add texture. To improve your work in the future I suggest you practice anatomy and proportions. This piece has some errors in proportions that if fixed could easily really up the quality of your work. Some examples of these errors in this piece are : it looks like the space between the eyes and the eyebrows is a little too small and the eyes possibly too large. The right upper cheek seems a little slim, and I think the shadow/ line of the nose could be brought out to the right and maybe covering the inner corner at the angle the head is. Finally as a general rule the line of the middle line of the lips extends from pupil to pupil. These are really all just small errors that when combined can leave a face looking off but with practice and knowledge in basic proportions you can create even better master pieces. Dont be afraid the add deeper shadows and to draw what you see in a refernce not what you think should be there Good Luck! Happy rating :)
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