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This morning,
I felt your sweet breath on my cheek
Through the open window.
Flowing so tenderly around me,
As if to say,
   “I’m here.”

This morning,
I heard you singing to me
From the trees all around.
A soft melody
That seems to say,
   “I’m here.”

Today,
I sensed the warmth of our smile
As you watched over me,
Keeping my steps safe.
And you let me know,
   “I’m here.”

Today,
I danced amidst your kisses
As your love fell from the heavens,
Messing up my hair and playing over me,
Your way of saying,
   “I’m here.”

And tonight,
I revel in your touch,
As I roll into bed,
Your arms wrapping around me.

I listen to your voice
Softly whisper in my ear,
Cool and Caressing,
“Good evening, love...
   “I missed you.”
OMG!! Antipode’s writing poetry?!?! Well, yes. I did this while I was sick in bed yesterday, feverish and quite possibly delusional.


Dedicated to my dear Shade.
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Mike1204 Featured By Owner May 16, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice poem there, keep up the writtings.
^^
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IronicDeath Featured By Owner May 7, 2005
Very good. You ish talented.
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proud2bjunkie Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2004   Writer
that's so sweet!
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ShaddieDreamweaver Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2004
*Thumbs up* See? You DO write good poetry!! Hope you feel better as well. ^_^
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LuxInvictus Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2004
Thanks a bunch, sis! *hugs*
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Alexandrea-goth-girl Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2004   Writer
I loved it. It was just awesome. What's this about you don't write good poetry. I LOVE IT!!!!!
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