Reverse harem wo sagashite I

Czech version

Tadaaaa! First strip of my series subtitled "Perks and perils of searching for a reverse harem".
It's 100% based on my own experience

Part 2 lusi-chan.deviantart.com/art/R…
Part 3 lusi-chan.deviantart.com/art/R…
Part 4 lusi-chan.deviantart.com/art/R…

Original (Czech) version lusi.nantoka.info/strips/rever…


I had a really hard time translating the last panel. While in czech it had unintentionally doubble meaning, I wasn't able to translate it in english so I would be completely satisfied with it (nor was I able to settle for one of my friends' suggestions).
Anyway if you want to have it with doubble meaning similar to the original one, just imagine, that in the last panel is "They won't come on their own".


Had something similar happen to you? I'm looking forward to all comments