As few may have seen, I'm attempting to write a historic style fantasy Saga of my OC Lanthild, the huge teutonic teen. English isn't my native language and allthough I am colaborating with HypersonicXdA for a decent syntax and grammar, I'm not realy satisfied with it. I feel there is something missing - namely the descriptions of details, i.e. of muscle, expression, movement, situations.
I realy need an editor that would enjoy working and developing this "Saga" and who is also expert in "muscle description" like Mr. shhh or Thesabre.
I have the "core fragments" of the story, I just need to somehow fit them together and form them to one - leaving enough room to insert new ideas and chapters as one goes along. I'm also open to new ideas and plots to expand and continue the story. I want to leave something on DA that people can enjoy and inspirethem to their own ideas. And I appreciate well founded critique. Why do I write this journal? Basicly because I am sort of "stuck" and in a "blockade". I realy have no motivation to write this just for myself and I do hope to get some feedback.