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As few may have seen, I'm attempting to write a historic style fantasy Saga of my OC Lanthild, the huge teutonic teen. English isn't my native language and allthough I am colaborating with HypersonicXdA for a decent syntax and grammar, I'm not realy satisfied with it. I feel there is something missing - namely the descriptions of details, i.e. of muscle, expression, movement, situations.
I realy need an editor that would enjoy working and developing this "Saga" and who is also expert in "muscle description" like Mr. shhh or Thesabre.
I have the "core fragments" of the story, I just need to somehow fit them together and form them to one - leaving enough room to insert new ideas and chapters as one goes along. I'm also open to new ideas and plots to expand and continue the story. I want to leave something on DA that people can enjoy and inspirethem to their own ideas. And I appreciate well founded critique.  Why do I write this journal? Basicly because I am sort of "stuck" and in a "blockade". I realy have no motivation to write this just for myself and I do hope to get some feedback.

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Tom Voss
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ericf989 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2018
Thanks for the fave!  :D
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Lupus14 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2018
You don't need to thank me everytimeI faveone of your pics.
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ericf989 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2018
'K.
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ericf989 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2018
Thanks for the fave!  :D
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Lupus743 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2018
Happy birthday!
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Lupus14 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2018
thanks
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ericf989 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2018
Happy Birthday!  :D
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Lupus14 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2018
Thanks!
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ei9 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2018
Sheng ri Kuai le to you this weekend Tom my man and may it be 100%badass awesome and kickass great at the same time!
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