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CHRISTINA AND FRIENDS
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This tier contains picture stories of Chistina Carter who finds herself in all sorts of trouble. Ms Carter is usually in the company of a female friend and is roughed up by gangs of villains.
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PANEL 1: There's an issue with perspective here, and a few more details on the left background would have better balanced the composition. In fact, on the right side we have subtle sunrays passing between trees, which enrich the background and also gives depth of field. Well done.
PANEL 2: Anatomy and layering are great. However, there are so many lines and shadows, and the character is so dark, that it's difficult to "read" the image at first glance.
PANEL 3: This panel enlights the whole page, I love this contrast. It can be enhanced with a thin "rim light" (usually known as backlight) around the character.
PANEL 4: Almost perfect. Lack of background details leaves space for baloons. If I am to find a weak point, it would be the characters foot aligned with the bottom of the panel. Try to cover the lower part of the panel, and you may notice it gets a stronger sense of depth.
PANEL 5: Layout construction is good and does work. I wonder if trees are small or perspective needs adjustment. Trees do not get the same light as the ground and the characters, even if they are on the same line. The "moontail" of the puppy on the right is hidden so we can barely guess it's his/her tail. Moving the character a bit on the left would have helped to create a cleared image (as said for panel 3 about lines and colors).
OVERALL: I can sense a lot of talent here, improving on details will surely make it blow. Perspective, composition and color adjusting (the entire page looks a bit too dark, if printed it will look even darker) are the topics I suggest to practice on.
Keep up the good job! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="21" height="15" alt="
