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background practice and pose practice, i am pretty please with this :0

i want to know what i can improve :''0000 so u experienced artists halp 
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There isn't really much to change. You could add some shadows and edit the lighting. Since it's an outside scene, there is the sun that could cast light over, under, or beside the object of focus. So you could add light and shadows according to where from the sun is facing. Like for example, shadows of leaves on the ground or shadows and lighting details in the fur. Or it can just look like an overcast day,and if that's what you were going for, then good job. Otherwise, everything really just looks fine. (Extra space extra space extra space extra)
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Critique by HopelessRomantic1997 May 14, 2015, 12:32:47 PM
For vision, you did extremely well on the background and the colors you used in this. It makes the forest background looks realistic, while adding some cartoony flare to it. ^^
For originality, I've seen a couple of different styles of a forest before...but yours is the most detailed out of them all along with how you drew the wolf in this as well.

For Technique, the lineart looks a bit sketchy, but it adds to the depth of the whole piece, the coloring is fantastic and the shading is phenomenal :)

As for the impact, I think the picture as a while adds a calming effect, but a little bit intense because of the wolf staring at the viewer.


Overall, you did a fantastic job with the background practice.
Keep up the good work Neo. ^^

~Marie
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Ahalteke Featured By Owner May 14, 2015
I really really like this ;-;
especially the face and expression and unf u could make it rly rly intense
Could I try to paint over it and stash it to show u what can be changed? ^^
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lunar-neo Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Student General Artist
sure thing! i love it when you do that tbh! 
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Ahalteke Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
Iiiiiiii actually wasn't able to show what I was trying to say but XD the values between the trees should be accentuated to indicate depth :)
and less focus on the area around the wolf with focus on its' eyes <3
New Canvas by Ahalteke  
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lunar-neo Featured By Owner May 16, 2015  Student General Artist
:00 i'll bring that into consideration next time 
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RgRob64 Featured By Owner Edited May 14, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
It looks like a screencap from a animated short!

but with the watermark.. Still a great piece of work!
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lunar-neo Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Student General Artist
:0 i kno i hate the watermark too, but i need it so no one steals 
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RgRob64 Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
oh yeah, don't want anyone to spoil your mood
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rogve Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
/sCREAMS

Omg this is amazing ;;v;; this has to be one of my most favorites by far <333
your sketches are fabulous 
like u 
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lunar-neo Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Student General Artist
;; thank! 
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rogve Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np ;w; i meant every word
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