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No signs of pain

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model : Marta


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Martinael's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

No!

Praca pierwszorzędna <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Pomysł jest nieprzecietny, w końcu coś innego niż piękne umalowane kobiety, teraz jest umalowana piękna kobieta <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

Kolorystyka dobrana świetnie, cudownie wręcz. Dawno żadna praca nie wywarła na mnie tak ogromnego wrażenia.

Jest prosta, ale ... jaka w swej prostocie!
Mim ... mimika, kolory ... czerń z bielą pięknie kontrastują z jej blond włosami - modelka dobrana perfekcyjnie!

Technika. Nie widzę tu mistrzostwa, bo nie jest ono potrzebne, praca jest po prostu pełna ...

A o wrażeniu ... napisał bym na miliard słów, bo tyle może opisać taką głęboką pracę. Miliard ... może przesadziłem, bo co chwilę mam poczucie, że mogę mówić o niej godzinami, a mija sekunda i ... brak mi ich.


Ogromne brawa.
Lukreszja's avatar
Dziękuję ogromnie!:heart:
yachiru-fukutaichou's avatar
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Pedbrito's avatar
love everything about it
Mictian-Ahuizotl's avatar
really good pic!! I really like the contrast between the red and other colors, and that you didn't centered the girl! With the expression of the arms... beautifull!!
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MidNiteRose9's avatar
I can't do actual Critiques on DA, but I can tell you what I think anyway. :)

Your lighting and focal point are right on.
You've got a great model to work with, with good make up and costume. (I love the tears on her cheeks by the way)
I like the angle that you used also. i'm not sure if its supposed to, but it makes her seem emotionally stronger. But this is one of the meanings I'm getting out of the picture-That she looks strong and together, but she feels trapped.
And finally, I like where she is in the picture. "Rule of Thirds" as my photography teacher puts it. having her not be in the center, but still be the center of attention says a lot in the photograph.

Overall, I think you did a great job. Your lighting, subject, angle, and visual effects worked great. You also have great meaning and emotion in this photograph. I enjoyed looking at it and putting meaning into it for myself.
Lukreszja's avatar
thank you for your opinion :) I really appreciate it!
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aTTe-1's avatar
Theres something that I adore about mimes and this photo is great! This kinda color scheme really fits a mime :D
Lukreszja's avatar
Thank you :D I've usually seen mimes in b&w and I wanted to prove that in colors it can look good too (;
blackskyyy's avatar
podoba mi się :)
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