I can't do actual Critiques on DA, but I can tell you what I think anyway.
Your lighting and focal point are right on.
You've got a great model to work with, with good make up and costume. (I love the tears on her cheeks by the way)
I like the angle that you used also. i'm not sure if its supposed to, but it makes her seem emotionally stronger. But this is one of the meanings I'm getting out of the picture-That she looks strong and together, but she feels trapped.
And finally, I like where she is in the picture. "Rule of Thirds" as my photography teacher puts it. having her not be in the center, but still be the center of attention says a lot in the photograph.
Overall, I think you did a great job. Your lighting, subject, angle, and visual effects worked great. You also have great meaning and emotion in this photograph. I enjoyed looking at it and putting meaning into it for myself.