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Paty girl (2014) by LuizRaffaello Paty girl (2014) by LuizRaffaello
I remade this drawing of 2009...
Paty girl by LuizRaffaello 
Five years after and I think that I have an little change in my style... :B
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Very nice drawing Luiz. You did an excellent job with the shading, her body looks rounded. The only things I see that look a bit off are in her right arm (on the left of the drawing). her armpit looks too sharp and seems like it goes into the body too far, like her arm is trying to come out from more of the front of her body instead of the side. Her hand also is shaded differently to the rest of the drawing and so it looks a bit awkward. I think if you blend the shadows in a bit more in the hand so it shows the contours better(as you did with the rest of the drawing) and adjust the shoulder, maybe lower it slightly and make it look a bit longer, and shave off a little of her back under where her arm connects and soften those contours of her armpit a little. The dimension of her clothes and accessories are great and of course, this is a great improvement overall from the one you drew before. You have made a lot of improvement just from when I first met you to now. Great job, keep up the good work :)
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
Very pretty :lovely: 
LuizRaffaello Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
Dualpaint Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
great picture:)
LuizRaffaello Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
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