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Script Issue 2, Page 4
PAGE 4
FRAME 1
A large frame where we see from floor level up, Dr. Firemello laying on the floor, dead. A pool of blood around her head and blood streaming down her ears and nose. Dr. Arzuaga looking down on her, and behind him at the window there's a beautiful sunset over the ocean’s horizon.
Dr. Arzuaga – I guess it is time to go and see what my son has been up to all these years.
Dr. Arzuaga – I need the four of you to report to the lab immediately.
FRAME 2
Four inquisitors run into the lab where Dr. Arzuaga greets them.
Dr. Arzuaga – One of you. Clean this mess up.
Dr. Arzuaga – As for the rest, start packing.
FRAME 3
Close-up of Dr. Arzuaga.
Dr. Arzuaga – We are moving to Miami.
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Literature
Script Issue 2, Page 3
PAGE 3
FRAME 1
Dr. Arzuaga is now standing by the window looking out. Dr. Firemello is standing by the table, the chain around her ankle, stretched as far as it will go.
Dr. Firemello – It is somewhat like the beginning of your own race.
FRAME 2
A tighter shot of the side of Dr. Arzuaga contemplating the horizon over the ocean. Talking to himself.
Dr. Arzuaga – My own people... like Moses had his people to liberate from the Pharaoh… Just like Jesus Christ, and His people… his disciples, his family…
FRAME 3
From behind him Dr. Firemello brings him out of his daydream.
Dr. Firemello – Dr. Arzuaga, as you may well know, women’s chromosomes are XX while men are XY. With the variation being on the Y chromosome, I would hypothesize that this anomaly should only manifest in males.
Dr. Arzuaga – The Lord never ceases to amaze me.
Dr. Arzuaga – So this gift that He has bestowed upon me… is for men only?
Dr. Arzuaga
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Literature
Script Issue 2, Page 2
PAGE 2
FRAME 1
Wide shot of a laboratory in an old building. Large stone-brick walls and outdated abandoned equipment casting shadows all around. Dr. Arzuaga and another doctor are sitting at a table at the center of the room. On this table there is a microscope, a computer, test tubes and lots of papers. The other doctor, a lady, in her early 40s dressed in a lab coat, glasses and her hair is up on a ponytail.  
5 years ago
Dr. Arzuaga’s Research Facilities
Canary Islands, Spain
Dr. Arzuaga – So after 3 months of continuous probing with your needles, with all your travel expenses paid including room & board, you come to tell me that I’m “defective”?
FRAME 2
Extreme close-up of the female doctor. She’s extremely angry and barks back at Dr. Arzuaga.
Dr. Firemello – That’s exactly what I said. You have a genetic disorder that’s rendering your Y chromosome defective Doctor.
Dr. Firemello – And when rec
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Luije Padrón
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Current Residence: Under a bridge near you.
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Script. Issue #2, Part I is up!

Fri Sep 14, 2007, 7:42 AM
I just want to continue thanking you all for your wonderful comments as well as helping me SPREAD THE WORD! Like I said before the whole first story arc (six issues) are already written... Here's Part I of Issue #2. A little background story on our Patriarch. More is coming soon! You didn't actually think I would just put the whole script on there, did you? hehehe. Sorry, I just want to release the script as the artwork comes along. Once the full script for Issue #2 is up, I'll start uploading the final artwork. Enjoy! Big hug to you all and please remeber to... SPREAD THE WORD!

My AdCast ran out :( so I need your help more than ever. Please feel free to tell your friends if you like what you have read. Link my page to yours or forward it! The Story Continues. Do you want to know what happens next? Well… we need your help to find Vinculum a home. Spread the word and tell your favorite comic book publisher that you would like to see more of us and hopefully you’ll find us soon enough at your local comic book shop. The story’s already written and it’s just waiting for you!

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:iconkarma1144:
karma1144 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2007  Hobbyist Filmographer
hi samuelito!!!
its me kimmi. this is my account...i forgot the password for my last account so i had to create a new one. wats up man!!!
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blood-inside Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2007
dang... im really loving it. very interesting.
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:iconluije:
Luije Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2007
Thanks! Spread the word!
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Anywien Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2007
You are fantastic beyond belief! I don't know why you needed AdCast! I'm going to plug you like never before (not in a dirty way)
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TheKing0fHearts Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2007
very nice work. and yes, adcast works. I am also an adcast click. and you have gained yourself another watch, I cannot wait to read the rest. keep up the good work. :)
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SwashyBuckles Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2007   Traditional Artist
i didnt read any of your comic.
it didnt look like the kind of comics i usually read
thats not a bad thing, it might sound like im being mean, but im not. hold on: listen.
I think it's pretty dang awesome youre doing this. you have a story and you have an artistic talent that makes me think of zombie action and wonderful ness. i hope that you complete your story and go on to others! i wish that i could do the same, so i send you my best! keep on going! <3<3 *p.s. ad cast really does work, i saw you on my page.*
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PanzerGoth Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2007
Wow...
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Luije Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2007
Danke! I'm assuming is a good "wow"... hopefully is a good "wow"... bad "wow"s are bad... really bad... Anyways, thanks again! And if you liked it, I would really appreciate it if you would visit my latest journal entry and spread the word! Thanks again.
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PanzerGoth Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2007
Good wow :D
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Lucius-Ferguson Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2007
I won't miss this story. For anything in the world (I hope I didn't write bullshits)
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