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As tears of blood fall, so do I.
I never did anything, but  when I die,
shadows come to claim...
My heart has filled with shame.
Of what I let fly,
of all the years that went by.
All I've said,
is if I'm dead,
all I want is a test...
Just to find my place to rest.
Now all I have to fear,
is if I'm really here.
Bloody tears drip as I close my eyes,
thinking back to lies.
They enclosed my life from time to time,
but still I did no crime...
I can't help but think,
how can I sink?
So low, so deep.
Instead of being dead, am I just...
asleep?
This is a poem I had from a while ago.
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JACK-BAZURK Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006
I DIDN´T READ IT CUZ i HATE TO READ.....SORRY
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LuckyNothin Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Read it or else...
you suffer a horribly evil death!
:chainsaw:
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JACK-BAZURK Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2006
BUT I DONT WANNAAA :tears:
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lonely-vampires Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006
yay! i like it! :+fav:
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LuckyNothin Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanx! Glad you like it! :D
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lonely-vampires Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006
youre velcome! lol. :heart:
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JigglyWigglies Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006  Professional General Artist
:wow:............i'm pretty much speechless.....nut i love it this portrays (i think thats how u spell it) what just might happen if u die! i mean what if there is no god or satan and u just lay there dead!...ok mabye i wasn't speechless but otherwise i am gonna :+favelove: cause this is and awsome poem!!! ok i'm done ranting buh byes!! :wave:
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LuckyNothin Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanx for the comment and the fave! :D
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ditzibum Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006
nice... i like.
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LuckyNothin Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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