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Take a bow.....for now.

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Take a bow.....for now.

Now it's time for a curtain call So take a step and avoid the fall This is my goodbye to you all Now I won't be back till mid fall So please guys, take care of yourselves Don't be like those evil little elves Although I know a ffew of you that are twelve >.> I'm not gonna say who, so keep it to yourselves I'm about to make a big step in my life So it's all good and it's one big strife Boy I remember just getting a knife... That was fun, I had to time of my life Now it's about to get bigger than reality It has way more guts then a fatality I'm about to join a new facilty And it's called the US Military I will stand proud as a

I'm here for you.

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I'm here for you.

No matter what they say No matter what the radios play I'm here for you everyday In every single way I've made many mistakes All the decisions I make The chances I take Make no mistake I'm here for you This isn't new This is true It's in plain view Now let's sit back And play the next track

I'm alive!! You gotta believe me!

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I'm alive!! You gotta believe me!

I was waking up after a long night at the bar I wasn't drinking, my friends were But I came home with a headache Hm? Yes mom, I'm awake What? I can't move.... Mom...can you hear me? Mom...MOM! Where are you going? Why are you getting dad? I'm here, I'm ok... Why is he checking my neck? Mom...dad, what's going on? Why are you crying? Please put me downl dad, I'm fine! Don't put me in the car! I'm not ready for school yet! Where are we going? The hospital? I'm ok! Why are the docters rushing out of the ER? I'm fine! See?? They said I have no pulse??? I'm alive! You gotta believe me! Why is the doctor shaking his head?? Mo
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Put it down....please....

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Put it down....please....

Hey....listen to me... Put it down... It's not worth it You're not a clown Ignore them It's not worth it Don't end your life For this bullshit Give it to me I'll remove the bullets What do you mean "no"? Please don't do this You have a whole life ahead of you! Don't do this man! Do you remember that list? This wasn't the plan! Plese don't end your life!! It's not going to make it better! All that's going to do Is give the bullies pleasure!! You're not listening! NO WAIT! -BAM- .....no.... ...........................no......

Pocket Joke #1

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Pocket Joke #1

Okay so a man walks into a bar with a monkey.... Well forget the joke, and your mom's a whore.

My and Lucain...fighting again....

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My and Lucain...fighting again....

What is going on bro?? What do you mean? You're just gonna let it go? We kept it clean! So what! You're just gonna let her walk all over you? Dude grow a pair and try something new! I'm trying to tell you it's over! No need to keep pushing the motor! What's done is done! No need to start another one! I've already lost a friend No need to go back at it again! No! You NEED to listen to me! She destryoed your image, don't you see? You worked for to gain that right! And you're just gonna give up without a fight?? You know good and well I don't do that! I heard she thinks you're fat I don't care what she thinks! Yes my image is

Two, Six, One, Five, Zero, Four, hold the door!

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Two, Six, One, Five, Zero, Four, hold the door!

Two Minutes till take off!! Six moments not to laugh off! One killer on the run Five bullets in the gun! Zero chance to hide anymore Because Jimmy forgot to hold the door! Shit....

A small horror story...

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A small horror story...

Well it all started off like any other night, it was tranquil. The owls would sing and the stars would dance. The evening was grand, but the wolves out. The little girl was playing one evening, and all she heard was a howl. The parents come outside to see where she was. She was gone. Weeks had gone by, and still no sign of her. One day they parents had a weird smell in their house, but could never find the source. One night the parents stopped their search and went to bed. The father felt something tap his chest. His eyes were closed and his wife was asleep, he knew that much. He opened his eyes and no was there. He got up and grabbed a knife

Excuse Me?

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Excuse Me?

For one step at a time The death keeps getting closer Time keeps getting away Like that crazy road runner Life isn't easy to gain It take two to make one But it's easy to destroy Whether with actions, words, or a handgun We all go through those emotions Happy, sad, angry, excited, confused And let other people influence them By a gesture of being loved or abused Our world is falling apart World hunger, global warming, poverty and we say we try to help by stepping in But that only influence more hatred and robbery I know I sound negative, but someone has to say it It's not about you, we have bigger problems than the clothes your wearing Ev

Writers Block (updated)

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Writers Block (updated)

DAMNIT. Ok hold on Let's fix this before dawn I just mowed the lawn Now I'm thinking that I'm still a pawn I don't care, as long as my yard looks good I was thinking about the people cutting my wood. Would. Ok I'm just trying to break your concentration But it seems to be having some complications So I think I'm gonna need a small vacation So I'll have some time for contemplation Nation Creations are a sign of invention But we always place them in detention For that needless repetition Here, come here and sign this declaration Wait that.... Ok so I had a temporary block So now my brain is nothing but a rock I think I'll just give it a kno
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This is new..

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This is new..

So this is the new way I can write my words? ....I don't have as much freedom... I think I'll stick to st.ash for now lol
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Deviantart's Last Hoorah!

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Deviantart's Last Hoorah!

Well this is it guys here on the East coast, once midnight passes The old user interface will be gone...after almost two decades It's been a nice run and I'm glad to be a part of it. With my poetry reaching quite a few readers, and a wonderful crowd Thanks for reading... I'll be around, but I don't know for how long on here...

Insanity

Pressure Makes Diamonds

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Pressure Makes Diamonds

The harder the situation and the limitations create the perfect scenario Therefore making the perfect ratio plain and told in stories in places of old Old focused words placed by reality based of timed trends that mark humanity Sadly that would be statically placed wrong then moved by the public dramatically Not the words I thought I’d be using today.. *sigh* The next few thoughts spewed out like lyrical compost almost sounds legible like Future Intangible audio moved by millions and endorsed by the young to the companies pockets Profit half of what people buy to stable homes, commercials in progress to increase profits Stop it, mon

If I was an artist

Ain't what it used to be..

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Ain't what it used to be..

Remember when we log in and new things popped up that was entertaining? We jump on the computers, locked in to cool things that we saw as interesting Now it's all memes and pop culture, trying to see who we beefin with What it all means is all torture, thinking of who else we sleepin with. Online back when it was new and quite the vast concept Now it's a war zone and it's always a fight about mass conflict Not even a simple conversation, just argue about the little things and we get clicks Pointless indeed and not even a "how are you?". It's the simple things that sticks Internet is getting faster and faster, data transfers into a new era
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Creepers Keep (Victim) [edited and revised]

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Creepers Keep (Victim) [edited and revised]

I didn't think that was gonna happen... let me explain. So tonight was supposed to be a good one (nope) But everybody told me to go like a food run (yup) But I'm not the product of paranoia, so I had to be gone I didn't think it was necessary, like fuckin with no strap on (Damn) I didn't notice it was that late! It’s now dawn! Having that sense of urgency, but I don't know what from Ran into someone long and had a mask on (shit) Skinny limbs don't move like that, I’m not staying for the sequel (run!) If I stand toe to toe with him, I’m damn sure ain’t his equal He didn't move...maybe it just not to cause a commotio
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Creepers Keep (Hunter)

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Creepers Keep (Hunter)

Oh another one? Easy They always walk all alone in the dark I always look for the spark Interested in my playful noise Teleportation bores I walk with the swiftness Always come with my stiffness                                 Damn you slow You can't even escape me I see what you've been up lately                                 Barely You thought you could make it? Really? They always walk in the dark They got the bite but no bark Which makes it easier to hide you If what you say is really true    Even I'm not gonna miss you SMILE

Hanging up the Mic

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Hanging up the Mic

Why would I like to hang up my mic? Comedian was one of my dreams, it seems like it's not coming I can't keep up with the changing times and media, "say something funny" Honey this was supposed to be me in an introspective Did you know that we get disrespected? When we stand on that stage and get no protection Is this the life I should be projecting? Good question, next question. Damnit man I need some kind of a big break to show everyone what I can do I'm just kinda tired of being in that point where there's something I gotta prove Move to me and sit down to listen deep in conversation No need to pay for a show, your laughter is compensat

Spotlight

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Spotlight

Clicks

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Clicks

[Disclaimer, please read the description before you read this poem, it shows how you're supposed to read  this piece, thank you] We log on-check-check-check-checking over FaceBook- Click-click-click-click-clinkin' all the updates- (Scroll-scroll-scroll-scroll-scrolling on the blogs again)            This is the new society ten-fifty-seventy-ninety-over hundred friends online three-twenty two-hundred nine the month before (Scroll-scroll-scroll-scroll-scrolling on the blogs again)            This is the new society Block-block-block-block-all of the pornography (Scroll-scroll-scroll-scroll-scrolling on the blogs again); Minds-minds-minds
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Spotlight

This is my phone....

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This is my phone....

This is my phone, there's many like it, but this one is mine, my phone is my best friend, it is my life, I must master it as I master my life. Without me it is useless, without my phone I am useless I will dial my phone true I must text faster than my brethren who is trying to contact me, I must text them before they text me....I will. My phone and myself know what counts in society is not the data we receive Not the tweets we get, The reblogs on tumblr, nor the likes on facebook. Knowing the message is sent that counts. We will send My phone is human, even as I, because it is my life Thus I learn it as a brother, learn its glitches, t
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I'm a just a stand-up comedian who sees art in many forms, such as paintings, drawings, music, comedy, poetry, and so much more. I'm a poet and I say that's art no matter how you put it! I'm in the military and serving my country has benefited me in the long run.
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I'm working on this 100 ThemesWell alright guys I'mgonna do this
This will be updated regularly :)  Thanks InAWorldOfScones
100 THEMES WRITING CHALLENGE
1. Introduction
2. Love
3. Light
4.Dark
5. Seeking Solace
6. Break Away
7. Heaven
8. Innocence
9. Drive 
10. Breathe Again
11. Memory
12. Insanity
13. Misfortune
14. Smile
15. Silence
16. Questioning
17. Blood
18. Rainbow
19. Gray
20. Fortitude
21. Vacation
22. Mother Nature
23. Cat
24. No Time
25. Trouble Lurking
26. Tears
27. Foreign
28. Sorrow
29. Happiness
30. Under the Rain
31. Flowers
32. Night
33. Expectations
34. Stars
35. Hold My Hand
36. Precious Treasure
37. Eyes
38. Abandoned
39. Dreams
40. Rated
41. Teamwork
42. Standing Still
43. Dying
44. Two Roads
45. Illusion
46. Family
47. Creation
48. Childhood
49. Stripes
50. Breaking the Rules
51. Sport
52. Deep in Thought
53. Keeping a Secret
54. Tower
55. Waiting
56. Danger Ahead
57. Sacrifice
58. Kick in the Head
59. No Way Out
60. Rejection
61. Fairy Tale
62. Magic
63. Do Not Disturb
64.
not that easy! :O_o:
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Favourite style of art: Digital
Operating System: Windows 10
MP3 player of choice: Any Apple Device that I have...
Wallpaper of choice: My own shit
Skin of choice: Black... what does this have to do with anything?
Favourite cartoon character: Tom & Jerry
Personal Quote: There's always a reason for something...

Favourite Visual Artist
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Favourite Movies
I don't have one...
Favourite TV Shows
Durarara, Naruto, Lie to Me, Bleach, Bones, House, M.A.D., Robot Chicken
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Kanye West, T-Pain, Boney James
Favourite Books
The Way of Shadows, Warriors series
Favourite Writers
Edgar Allen Poe
Favourite Games
Okami for Wii and PS2
Favourite Gaming Platform
PS3
Tools of the Trade
Photoshop, my Material Book with my jokes in it!
Other Interests
Music, Comedy, and other forms of art.

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ChifforStudent Digital Artist

ty for the fave and watch !! ;u; <3

Lucain24Hobbyist Writer

You're indeed welcome ^^

Lucain24Hobbyist Writer

No thanks

Thanks for joining BreaktThroughArt! :) (Smile)
We're very happy to have someone as talented as you be part of the team.
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Lucain24Hobbyist Writer
Hey thanks for the kind words. I appreciate it.
CherryInTheSunProfessional Digital Artist
Hiii Lucain!
Thanks A LOT for hitting that Watch button! :icondancingchopperplz:
You're superrrrr awesome! Cyborg Franky (Super Cool) [V1] And it makes me REALLY happy to know that you enjoy what I do!