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Inktober 15 Scene by LualaDy Inktober 15 Scene by LualaDy


INKTOBER 2016 day 15

Illustration of a poem by George Bacovia (1881-1957), a Romanian poet.

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Scene


White trees, black trees
Naked in the solitary park:
A scene of mourning, bleak ...
White trees, black trees.
 
Again the regrets weep in the park ...
 
With white feathers, black feathers
Wanders a bird with a stark
Voice through the age-old park ...
With white feathers, black feathers.
 
The phantoms appear in the park ...
 
And white leaves, black leaves;
White trees, black trees;
And white feathers, black feathers,
A scene of mourning, bleak ...
 
A gradual, thin snowfall in the park ...

* * *

India ink and white acrylic ink
Toned paper is sketchbook
A5 x2




Wow, first of all, no request today! Luala's taking a break!
I woke up this morning with this very idea in my head. So, naturally, I had to paint it.

This is a poem my grandmother likes a lot, and I learn it from her.
Oh wait, what??? Luala, you're not French???
Well... yes... and no... not from birth. I'm from Moldova.
Now you know.
Lal

The poem of course... sounds way better in the original version: youtu.be/-fVyOJyEELE

Decor

Copacii albi, copacii negri
Stau goi în parcul solitar
Decor de doliu funerar ...
Copacii albi, copacii negri.

În parc regretele plâng iar ...

Cu pene albe, pene negre
O pasăre cu glas amar
Strãbate parcul secular ...
Cu pene albe, pene negre ...

În parc fantomele apar ...

Şi frunze albe, frunze negre;
Copacii albi, copacii negri;
Şi pene albe, pene negre,
Decor de doliu funerar ...

În parc ninsoarea cade iar ...


But it won't help you to read it hahaha. It is a really really beautiful poem. The sounds are just better...

I really really missed doing illustrated literature (see Amarantheans, one T!!!), and this month I brough you TWO of them, so I'm really happy ^^
I want to keep improving the real book effect. This is why, this time, I painted on the left page in my sketchbok and left the right page blank. Then I scanned them both in the same file and added the text on the right page. Hihihi, Luala's feeling so proud.

What else? Trees. Again, but they're really nice to paint and to look at. And I suppose it's a good skill to acquire. For my future illustrated books, of course =D

I also wanted (for a long time) to explore more the black and whie ink on toned paper. This time though, it looks better scanned. It really surprised me, I had almost no adjustment to make. The sketchbook paper is a bit too thin for liquid ink and it warps a little. But if you put it on the other side of the room then yeah it looks good =D




UPDATE

I had originally imagined a layout for the poem, but because of copyright, I switched to illustration only.
You can see here what I had in mind, in a world where I had the rights to use the poem directly ^^

Scene by LualaDy





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:iconamarantheans:
Amarantheans Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
I do love the striking color on the brown paper, you captured the trees beautifully.
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2019  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks!
I still have blank pages in that sketchbook, should fill it up one day!!!
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:iconikrines:
IKrines Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
I love Birch trees!
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2019  Professional Traditional Artist
they're amazing aren't they? ^^
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:iconikrines:
IKrines Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed!
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:iconkirschpraline:
Kirschpraline Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It looks so beautiful and simple, well done! C:
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you!
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:iconrainygreentrabant:
RainyGreenTrabant Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
”Te uită cum ninge Decembre” ....... tot de Bacovia, interpretat magistral de Nicu Alifantis.....


Și  „ Dacă tu ai dispărea” pe versuri de Adrian Păunescu....


Extraordinară Artă, desigur !
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
I like this one =D
www.versuri.ro/versuri/mihai-e…

(nu pot sa scriu fara virgulita si fara caciulita =D)
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:iconrainygreentrabant:
RainyGreenTrabant Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Da.....Știu....Îmi vine să plâng........................
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconaya-lunar:
Aya-Lunar Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2018   Traditional Artist
Lovely scene, very nicely done :nod:
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you ^^
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:iconisletree:
isletree Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2018  Professional Artist
Love the composition, clear, smart and beautiful Heart 
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you so much ^^
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:iconminasaturne:
Minasaturne Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh avec le poème à côté c'est encore plus beau! J'aime vraiment le design! (Je ne me souvenais pas de cette pièce ¬¬)
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
c'était il y a 2 ans je crois ^^
merci!
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:iconsereida-arts:
Sereida-Arts Featured By Owner Edited Dec 13, 2017  Student General Artist
This is gorgeous! The trees look splendid!
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Huggy Hug) [V2] 
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:iconskillywidden:
skillywidden Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2017

The colours are beautiful. The white and the black looks wonderful on the brown paper.  

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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Huggy Hug) [V2] 
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:iconbadusev:
Badusev Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
This is beautiful!
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you ^^
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:iconamarantheans:
Amarantheans Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the trees :huggle: I think you managed to illustrate the poem quite well :heart: I loves it!
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
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:iconcontessa-corvulus:
Contessa-Corvulus Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016
Stupid question, but is this Romanian or Italian? (The trees look beautiful btw)
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Romanian, didn't I mention?
Illustration of a poem by George Bacovia (1881-1957), a Romanian poet.
I diiid =D
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:iconcontessa-corvulus:
Contessa-Corvulus Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016
Yeeeees you did, but someone in the comments brought Italian into the conversation so thought I might have missed something here :D (Big Grin) (but wait does that mean you speak Romanian?)
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
yes it does ^^
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:iconcontessa-corvulus:
Contessa-Corvulus Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016
Cool! Must be awesome to be bilingual.
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
I'm not bilingual
French is the only language I know well
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:iconsbeeart:
sbeeart Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
I love this! it's beautiful, such a good idea :heart:
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
yay glad you like it ^^
This type of piece, illustrated literature, is very close to my heart
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:iconyagellonica:
Yagellonica Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Brilliant!
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
=D
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:iconfrank-jaspers:
Frank-Jaspers Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Professional Writer
Awesome, I want to do something like this.
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh well, you just need a poem (you have many of them), some kraft paper, white ink and black ink, a few brushes =D
Oooor a good artist, which you can find at CollaborativeMinds =P (we're looking for more contributors for pieces seeking collaboration
Well, as long as they're not too much, you know the usual we don't accept this or that pack the groups provide...
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SinistrosePhosphate Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a lot easier to rhyme in Italian, I find! 
But this is a great piece, both the poem and the painting! 

Well done! :w00t:
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
I'm not good at rhyming anyway =D

My writings are more bold and choppy
Though I love this, I still wish I could make something more... musical ^^
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SinistrosePhosphate Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Rhyming in different languages can be quite different. I find it hard to rhyme in English (but that doesn't stop me from trying, of course... ^^;

Musical lyrics sometimes use slant-rhymes (words that sound like they could rhyme but actually doesn't). You might consider it for the future! Besides, if you consider counting meter in the language, a lot of words become more musical that way. And some languages are definitely easier than others when doing this. Italian is simpler than French, for example. So... it doesn't hurt to look into it. :) 
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
yeah no, I'm not considering counting
Unless it is purposedly different, unever, broken
Like these napowrimo piece,I had fun with them

Sunny day (cinquain)The Sun
High in the sky
A show I cannot see
A forbidden love, for I am
The Moon.
The artist's breakfast (tyburn)Sketching
Doodling
Drawing
Painting
I am in a drawing, painting mood
And I want some sketching, doodling food.


I like fixed forms that are something else than a simple rhyming column
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SinistrosePhosphate Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Some of the poetry forms can be choppy and eclectic. And most of them are more than just a simple rhyming column! (I believe the "rhyming column" business is just there to get children interested in trying their hands on poetry.) Only the older ones have tough forms and meters, but the new ones can be fun. At the end of the day, having some internal structure would help the poem sound more lyrical. 

After all, that's how "lyrics" were written in the first place, right? ^^;
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
oh yeah

don't try me on lyrics, I suck at that
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:iconsinistrosephosphate:
SinistrosePhosphate Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not great at it, either. 
But that's why I try from time to time. ^^;
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Crystallink Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Student General Artist
This is beautiful! So simple, yet so striking!

But unfortunately for me, I looked at the trees a certain way, and the knots on them suddenly looked like eyes. Now I can't unsee it! T_T
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:iconlualady:
LualaDy Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh yeah, I also called them eyes when I was drawing them.
Actually I had a tree when I was little, well it's still there but I'm not there anymore.
And it had (still has) a biiiig knot at my little head level. And it's was THE EYE =D

hm.... creepy I know
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Kreydus Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aaaah, now I see it too!
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:iconcrystallink:
Crystallink Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Student General Artist
I'm so sorry! DX
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:iconkreydus:
Kreydus Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's okay! I just won't be looking at the trees for a while XD Hopefully I will be able to unsee it. ;v;
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