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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 11

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 11

Chapter Eleven We kept going down the road for about an hour. When we did stop, the men began setting up a camp or something. I watched the man in the trench coat take the others into the biggest tent one by one. Was he questioning them? ---------- (Samus’ POV) At the very least, I can give them credit for not having me facing the opening to the tent. A small psychological disadvantage, but one that works in their favor. Whoever walks in will have a chance to profile me before I can even see them. After a few minutes, I hear footsteps approaching. Someone walks in; it was the man in the trench coat and slippers. In one hand, he hel

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 10 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 10 (REWRITE)

Chapter Ten Several more weeks passed by. I finally started to see progress; I was now able to consistently complete Gwenladon’s challenge, albeit with difficulty since Gwenladon knew what to expect from me. I was able to beat him each time, but only through raw power, not skill. I’d also learned from Aura what that feeling I’d gotten was: it was just my sense of touch, turned up to an eleven. I could feel vibrations in the air. That feeling I got from Gwenladon was his movement. This is one of the most basic senses of any Aurai, and it was a sign that I was on the right path. However, despite my little victories, I’

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 9 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 9 (REWRITE)

Chapter Nine ---Present--- Before leaving Fredericksburg, we bothered to actually grab some food for the mansion since we were planning on staying for a couple weeks. While we were walking around, I could feel the markings on my back aching. That tells me that I’ll have to vent soon. ‘It has been awhile since I’ve used my power,’ I think to myself. It’s only mildly irritating these days, but it used to be a lot worse. The first time was so bad that the markings I have now are seared into my skin. ‘I honestly should sit down with Aura and do at least a pamphlet or something on Aurai physiology and such.

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 8 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 8 (REWRITE)

Chapter Eight ---June 11, 2111--- Can we all take a moment to appreciate Denny’s? Open 24 hours a day for all the people craving breakfast food at ungodly hours of the night, for the people that just left the bar after a bad break up, and for us, the people who forgot to get groceries before staying in a house that’d been empty for several years. Great place to work on a story, too. “It still irritates me that you went from being this little ass kid in Silver City to being able to kick my ass,” Gwenladon mopes. “Out with the old, in with the new,” I reply sarcastically. He slams a fist on the table. &#

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 7 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 7 (REWRITE)

Chapter Seven ---June 11, 2111--- I wake up around eight and get out of bed. I glance at the mirror and see the scars. I often forget I have them. Other times, I may wonder why most people don’t have them. I have claw marks on my face and chest. I’ve been stabbed, I’ve been shot. Hell, I have a lightning shaped scar twisting up my right arm. When you live a life like I’ve lived, this is typically what you end up looking like. I put my hand over the scar across my chest. That’s the one that always hurts the most. I got it from a clean sword slash that bit pretty deep. Honestly, it’s a miracle I’m s

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 6 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 6 (REWRITE)

Chapter Six ---Fall, 2011--- (Aura’s POV) The amount of power I witnessed in Patrick was unlike anything I’d ever seen. Ever surge of power I felt was bigger than the last. He was getting stronger with every passing minute and he didn’t even realize it. We still hadn’t told him that the fire was caused by him. I honestly began to worry about what might happen to him...I wondered if his power might grow too great for his body. Even more concerning was that dark aura that had been attacking him, especially after he described the dream he’d had that night. I’d never seen anything like it, not even when the

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 5 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 5 (REWRITE)

Chapter Five When we’d finally caught up to Gwenladon and Samus, they had already killed a mutant space pirate. I could see a Gardevoir standing by them. “Dancer!” Aura called out as he rushed past me. “Are you hurt?! What did they do?!” “Aura, calm down,” Dancer replied in a melodious voice. “I’m fine, thanks to Gwenladon and Samus here.” He breathed a sigh of relief. “Thank God…” He looked to Gwenladon. “Thank you.” “Anything for an old friend. How was the kid?” Aura looked at me, then back to Gwenladon. “He was incredible. Where

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 4 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 4 (REWRITE)

Chapter Four ---Fall, 2011--- (Pat's POV) Being an astronaut is not as fun as you might think. Sure, that might've been due to my lack of astronaut schooling, but I decided I'd never willingly get into any space craft again. Three guesses how that turns out. Anyways, we landed in a mountain range in the middle of the night. Samus' ship silently hovered above the ground while we got our bearings. Well, while Samus and Gwenladon got their bearings; I was just huddled with my back to a tree and staring blankly into the night. I just wanted to go home. It was cool and all learning that I had powers, but...I'm not a fighter. I kept thinking b

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 3 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 3 (REWRITE)

Chapter Three "Wait...tell me all that again," I said to Gwenladon. "Sure. Short version, you never actually made me up. For the longest time, I thought the same thing, but I ended up in this universe about seven years ago. It's been seven years since I last spoke to you." "What about you, Samus?" I asked. "I never came from another universe. I've been in this one my whole life. But, I guess there must've been a delay on your thoughts, because the last time I heard from you, I had been off Tallon IV for about six months. It's been about seven years since I last heard from you." "A delay?" "Not even light is instantaneous. Guess the same

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 2 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 2 (REWRITE)

Chapter Two ---June 6, 2111--- "Wait...so you literally dreamed up an imaginary friend, and one day, he comes to life?" "Not really. It's more complicated than that." "How complicated?" "If I tried explaining quantum mechanics and String Theory to you, not only would you get lost, I'd get lost, too," I told him. "Ah." We sat in silence for a moment. "Will what be enough for your piece? Or would you like some more?" "Just a bit more, if you don't mind," he said. "As you wish. Now before I go on, I want to ask you something." "Shoot." "Do you believe the story so far?" "Why wouldn't I?" he asked, slightly confused. "Do you see the
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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 11

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 11

Chapter Eleven We kept going down the road for about an hour. When we did stop, the men began setting up a camp or something. I watched the man in the trench coat take the others into the biggest tent one by one. Was he questioning them? ---------- (Samus’ POV) At the very least, I can give them credit for not having me facing the opening to the tent. A small psychological disadvantage, but one that works in their favor. Whoever walks in will have a chance to profile me before I can even see them. After a few minutes, I hear footsteps approaching. Someone walks in; it was the man in the trench coat and slippers. In one hand, he hel

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 10 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 10 (REWRITE)

Chapter Ten Several more weeks passed by. I finally started to see progress; I was now able to consistently complete Gwenladon’s challenge, albeit with difficulty since Gwenladon knew what to expect from me. I was able to beat him each time, but only through raw power, not skill. I’d also learned from Aura what that feeling I’d gotten was: it was just my sense of touch, turned up to an eleven. I could feel vibrations in the air. That feeling I got from Gwenladon was his movement. This is one of the most basic senses of any Aurai, and it was a sign that I was on the right path. However, despite my little victories, I’

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 9 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 9 (REWRITE)

Chapter Nine ---Present--- Before leaving Fredericksburg, we bothered to actually grab some food for the mansion since we were planning on staying for a couple weeks. While we were walking around, I could feel the markings on my back aching. That tells me that I’ll have to vent soon. ‘It has been awhile since I’ve used my power,’ I think to myself. It’s only mildly irritating these days, but it used to be a lot worse. The first time was so bad that the markings I have now are seared into my skin. ‘I honestly should sit down with Aura and do at least a pamphlet or something on Aurai physiology and such.

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 8 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 8 (REWRITE)

Chapter Eight ---June 11, 2111--- Can we all take a moment to appreciate Denny’s? Open 24 hours a day for all the people craving breakfast food at ungodly hours of the night, for the people that just left the bar after a bad break up, and for us, the people who forgot to get groceries before staying in a house that’d been empty for several years. Great place to work on a story, too. “It still irritates me that you went from being this little ass kid in Silver City to being able to kick my ass,” Gwenladon mopes. “Out with the old, in with the new,” I reply sarcastically. He slams a fist on the table. &#

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 7 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 7 (REWRITE)

Chapter Seven ---June 11, 2111--- I wake up around eight and get out of bed. I glance at the mirror and see the scars. I often forget I have them. Other times, I may wonder why most people don’t have them. I have claw marks on my face and chest. I’ve been stabbed, I’ve been shot. Hell, I have a lightning shaped scar twisting up my right arm. When you live a life like I’ve lived, this is typically what you end up looking like. I put my hand over the scar across my chest. That’s the one that always hurts the most. I got it from a clean sword slash that bit pretty deep. Honestly, it’s a miracle I’m s

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 6 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 6 (REWRITE)

Chapter Six ---Fall, 2011--- (Aura’s POV) The amount of power I witnessed in Patrick was unlike anything I’d ever seen. Ever surge of power I felt was bigger than the last. He was getting stronger with every passing minute and he didn’t even realize it. We still hadn’t told him that the fire was caused by him. I honestly began to worry about what might happen to him...I wondered if his power might grow too great for his body. Even more concerning was that dark aura that had been attacking him, especially after he described the dream he’d had that night. I’d never seen anything like it, not even when the

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 5 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 5 (REWRITE)

Chapter Five When we’d finally caught up to Gwenladon and Samus, they had already killed a mutant space pirate. I could see a Gardevoir standing by them. “Dancer!” Aura called out as he rushed past me. “Are you hurt?! What did they do?!” “Aura, calm down,” Dancer replied in a melodious voice. “I’m fine, thanks to Gwenladon and Samus here.” He breathed a sigh of relief. “Thank God…” He looked to Gwenladon. “Thank you.” “Anything for an old friend. How was the kid?” Aura looked at me, then back to Gwenladon. “He was incredible. Where

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 4 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 4 (REWRITE)

Chapter Four ---Fall, 2011--- (Pat's POV) Being an astronaut is not as fun as you might think. Sure, that might've been due to my lack of astronaut schooling, but I decided I'd never willingly get into any space craft again. Three guesses how that turns out. Anyways, we landed in a mountain range in the middle of the night. Samus' ship silently hovered above the ground while we got our bearings. Well, while Samus and Gwenladon got their bearings; I was just huddled with my back to a tree and staring blankly into the night. I just wanted to go home. It was cool and all learning that I had powers, but...I'm not a fighter. I kept thinking b

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 3 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 3 (REWRITE)

Chapter Three "Wait...tell me all that again," I said to Gwenladon. "Sure. Short version, you never actually made me up. For the longest time, I thought the same thing, but I ended up in this universe about seven years ago. It's been seven years since I last spoke to you." "What about you, Samus?" I asked. "I never came from another universe. I've been in this one my whole life. But, I guess there must've been a delay on your thoughts, because the last time I heard from you, I had been off Tallon IV for about six months. It's been about seven years since I last heard from you." "A delay?" "Not even light is instantaneous. Guess the same

Loyalty: Book One Ch. 2 (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Ch. 2 (REWRITE)

Chapter Two ---June 6, 2111--- "Wait...so you literally dreamed up an imaginary friend, and one day, he comes to life?" "Not really. It's more complicated than that." "How complicated?" "If I tried explaining quantum mechanics and String Theory to you, not only would you get lost, I'd get lost, too," I told him. "Ah." We sat in silence for a moment. "Will what be enough for your piece? Or would you like some more?" "Just a bit more, if you don't mind," he said. "As you wish. Now before I go on, I want to ask you something." "Shoot." "Do you believe the story so far?" "Why wouldn't I?" he asked, slightly confused. "Do you see the

PMD Archives: Names

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PMD Archives: Names

PMD Archives: Names Written by Eon of Exploration Team Aura In this world, most Pokémon have three different names attributed to them: their birth name, their species name, and their nickname. These three have different uses depending on the social context or the culture that they’re used. As such, this report will only be able to give a basic understanding of their use, as it’s impossible to state how every tribe or village uses these names. The birth name is the name parents will give to their child at birth. This is the most personal name and, therefore, is the one used the least. It’s typically given to differenti

Broken Consciousness Chapter 2 - Adjusting

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Broken Consciousness Chapter 2 - Adjusting

Chapter 2: Adjusting My name is Dalton. All I know about myself is that I woke up in a hospital bed with no memory of who I was or where I came from with my body slowly turning into a Meowstic. I was taken in by an organization called “Pokéumans”: Pokémon who were once human like me, living together in a secret underground base hidden within a huge tree called the Deep Eastern Forest Base. It had been a week since I first transformed into a Meowstic; I was put in Room #439, on the seventh floor of the base. I soon met my two roommates; a Krokorok named Kalin, and someone I recognized from the hospital wing: the Miltank

Broken Consciousness Chapter 1 - Identity

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Broken Consciousness Chapter 1 - Identity

Chapter 1: Identity Where…where am I ? I was lying on the ground; it was wet and muddy, and the air was thick and heavy with smoke. Sounds of men yelling and whooshing flooded my ears and the ground occasionally rumbled. What’s…? A voice came from somewhere behind me; it was muffled, but I could still make it out. “Grab the kid and run! I’ll hold them off Blaze!” “You got it! I’ll leave them to you Jet!” “What’s going…?” I felt someone pick me up and hoist me over their shoulder, I hung there limply like a dead fish. “I gotcha kid,” said the voi

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Loyalty: Book One Prologue (REWRITE)

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Loyalty: Book One Prologue (REWRITE)

Loyalty: Book One (REWRITE) Prologue ---June 6, 2111--- I was standing at the corner of what was once my front yard, staring at the empty, rusted flag pole. 'That's where it all started,' I think to myself. 'Every bit of it.' I glanced up and down the road behind me. This used to be North Madison Street. There would be cars parked on both sides for the whole half mile of road. Now? It's just empty. Everyone left Orange. Even my family and I. Guess we shoulda thought about trying to keep it the same for so long. Maybe we'll fix it up...nothing better to do. I came back to this place for...sentimental reasons. The flag pole? It marks where
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