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June Tasks Pages 1-20

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So here's this incredibly long thing. Since I might not have time to finish this next week I'm uploading it as this for now.

Participating teams:
Dragons Bane; Explorers
Doctrina Defector; Researchers
Dragons Pride; Hunters
Fortuna Tempus; Hunters
Myth Seekers; Explorers
Alchemists Diciples; Researchers

So a little walkthrough off what's going on;

Pages; 1-4
Wapasha from Fortuna Tempus is helping Sundance look for the Shuttles. Using his Extrasensory to find the shuttles and his Illusion ability to hide when a Lilligant walks out back after hearing some talking from her garden. Sundance then suggest that they go have some Ice Cream.

Pages; 4-8
All mentioned teams have at least one member walk down the runway of Chantelle's show. Poor Jackie who was only trying out Kain's Wooly Hooded Vest gets pushed out on the runway by a Gravler in charge of sending the "models" out. Tiamat got to borrow the Winter Mystic Shawl from another team. The other teams had their own accesories to show off meaning; Trixie, Marduk, Xue and Sierra

Pages; last frame on 8-9
More just for showing that the teams were part of the show thinking that the Ninja's may appear there, no such luck though and the teams have to head off and help with other things.

Pages; 10-15
Wapasha rushes to meet up with Rex who was left too hanging up posters and handing out flyers for helping Regigigas's reputation. It's not going so well but a passerby (Lilligant from earlier perhaps?) is still intrested in what they're doing. A Servine is less than impressed argues against the propaganda when Sierra and Tiamat joins up with the others. Sierra explains that all the guilds are working on making a new dungeon availble which will increase trading imensly non off which could have happened without having Regigigas around. Shown is Jackie, Rox and Kain running to find the entrance and building the outpost, Marduk, Jackie, Rox and Kain and building simple wodden building with a grass roof and berry bushes growing around it, and Xue, Pip, Trixie and Amice helping Solstice organize paperwork, Amice and Pip are fast enough to move and deliver papers quickly and both Xue and Trixie helped make things more efficient. Trixie even found time to make Solstice some brew (tea) to help calm her down and help against the headaches.

Pages; 16-first frame on 17
We see Marduke, Jackie, Rox and Kain finishing the outpost. They got help from some local bug-types (shown Caterpie and Mothim) to find the location and keep the Phantumps from messing things up. They got paid with some honey from town.

Pages; 17-19
With the DIY books they got from Solstice Xue and Amice Mimic's Trixie's Psychic (Xue) and Protect (Amice) so that they can safely move the sleeping Snorlax without waking it up and causing to much damage to the lab. Afterward they stay and help clean up.

Page; 20
Marduk, Jackie, Rox and Kain found a cave in in the dungeon right next to one off the underground lakes.

Continues here!!


I'll figure out the Merits/Strikes and rewards recorded on the second part.
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Sorry ^^; But if you could clarify which teams are specifically helping with building the outpost in your description, then resubmit to the Atlas please. You will have one week to make these changes. ^^; Apologies for any inconvenience!
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Both Explorers teams have already been listed in the deviation since it was uploaded, I do not see why it should have been rejected on the Atlas.
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Linked their applications you may have, but the submission itself is very unclear as to who's doing what. Overall both sets of pages could use some cleaning up, since right now it's very difficult to discern who's doing and saying what, and if they're even constructing anything at all. With this size and sketchiness, it's unclear who you mean by just "the Explorers." In order for the appropriate rewards to be given properly, it would be much more helpful if you either listed which members were helping, or clarified the submission itself so that we can easily see.

You have one week from the time of Bui's comment to do either option and resubmit.
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Do you require links to go along with those names? At every instance they are mentioned? I'd like to know now seeing as apparently no one could point out everything I'd need to change.
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cailas-moonHobbyist General Artist
No need for that. Please keep in mind the people checking submissions are only human. Due to the setup of the Atlas, we only focus on what we're checking, in order to process things faster, since several people are working on several objectives, not processing each team at a time. These things come up as we find them.

No, you do not need to link the app for every instance of the name. Just the name itself would suffice. It would be vastly preferred if you cleaned the submission so we could actually tell what we're checking - mods do need to be able to understand the submission for things to go smoothly - but I suppose it's not absolutely mandatory.
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Both entries have been change please talk with the other mods about what is mandatory and not because I'm most likely going to wake up tomorrow and find out that what you just told me is not true and I'll have to redo everything.
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It would be very much appreciated if you would add the rewards your teams chose as well as their respective strikes/merits to the description, yes~
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List of rewards and Merits added to the second part.
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