Tis sad yet lovely in its depth. It reminds me of being surrrounded in darkness....without hope, lost in eternity with the sole desire of loving someone but only to have my heart taken with broken dreams and broken promises. Once I wondered where was hope...this poem reminds me that I have hope in my hands...within my reach...as fragile it may seem but it is something to cherish and hold on to even more once its gone and found again. Seeing the young lady with so much depth and emotion in her while holding the precious rose in her hands, I can't help but get the feeling I can spend eternity without wings an eternity loving someone
Its beautiful in its pain and sadness as well as the beauty that comes with it.
I don't like to give critique but I like to write more than one word on how I am moved by a poem. It is my way of appreciating art and express my love for Aesthetics, what I consider Beautiful. I'm blabbing as usual but I can not help to appreciate words so beautiful and full of artistry as yours. I am moved. I am moved by your eloquence. I am moved by your talent. I am moved by how you can accomplish so much in your poetry at such a young age. That...that you don't see every day.
hence this is going into my favorites.