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Is it wrong,
That I feel this way?
Like I'm broken inside,
Like I've been betrayed?
Can you fix me?
Can I be remade?
Make the pain go away,
Please let it fade...
Can't you help me?
Oh please someone,
Can't you save me,
With an answer?
Please I beg you.
With my last breath.
Can't you save me?
Ever after...
Oh God,
Please stop this pain.
Are you up there?
Are you listening today?
I can't hear you god,
Please answer me.
Why can't I see myself,
In the mirror today?
Can't you help me?
Oh please someone,
Can't you save me,
With an answer?
Please I beg you.
With my last breath.
Can't you save me?
Alittle faster...
I'm alone here,
Just looking for you.
Are you out there?
Looking for me too?
I can't find you,
I've been searching so long.
Can you hear my voice?
I'm singing this song.
Can't you help me?
Oh please someone,
Can't you save me,
With an answer?
Please I beg you.
With my last breath.
Can't you save me?
Forever after...
No one answers,
I'm still alone.
Nothings out there,
Except an empty throne.
Where a princess should be,
but she turned to bone.
So I'm still alone,
In this field of stones.
Can't you help me?
Oh please someone,
Can't you find me,
A little faster?
When you find me,
If I still breath.
Can we please share
Eternal laughter?
Will you kiss me,
By the moonlight.
When I tell you,
that I love you?
If you'll do that,
then please find me.
I swear I'll give you,
All you're after....
That I feel this way?
Like I'm broken inside,
Like I've been betrayed?
Can you fix me?
Can I be remade?
Make the pain go away,
Please let it fade...
Can't you help me?
Oh please someone,
Can't you save me,
With an answer?
Please I beg you.
With my last breath.
Can't you save me?
Ever after...
Oh God,
Please stop this pain.
Are you up there?
Are you listening today?
I can't hear you god,
Please answer me.
Why can't I see myself,
In the mirror today?
Can't you help me?
Oh please someone,
Can't you save me,
With an answer?
Please I beg you.
With my last breath.
Can't you save me?
Alittle faster...
I'm alone here,
Just looking for you.
Are you out there?
Looking for me too?
I can't find you,
I've been searching so long.
Can you hear my voice?
I'm singing this song.
Can't you help me?
Oh please someone,
Can't you save me,
With an answer?
Please I beg you.
With my last breath.
Can't you save me?
Forever after...
No one answers,
I'm still alone.
Nothings out there,
Except an empty throne.
Where a princess should be,
but she turned to bone.
So I'm still alone,
In this field of stones.
Can't you help me?
Oh please someone,
Can't you find me,
A little faster?
When you find me,
If I still breath.
Can we please share
Eternal laughter?
Will you kiss me,
By the moonlight.
When I tell you,
that I love you?
If you'll do that,
then please find me.
I swear I'll give you,
All you're after....
I just got inspiration for this out of nowhere today. My muse must be a morning person cuz wow is she working right now. The wrods just started coming and I had to write it out. very little editing was needed on this.
I miss writing like this. It used to come this easy all the time. Not it takes longer most of the time.
I guess I Must still be drawing off my reserev of Pain and Unending sorrowfull hopless emotions. Because..... wow.
Anyways let me know what you all think.
I miss writing like this. It used to come this easy all the time. Not it takes longer most of the time.
I guess I Must still be drawing off my reserev of Pain and Unending sorrowfull hopless emotions. Because..... wow.
Anyways let me know what you all think.
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I can SO relate to this poem.