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Dying of the Light Page 13

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Ahsoka takes control of her Destiny.....




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jacob134's avatar
i love the story but if you don't mind some critique, i'm not so fond of how their cheeks are slightly... bloated. Maybe it's just me but it's a bit distracting.
lordhadrian's avatar
Ah, must be Liunor's style of drawing.  I don't mind a critique :):)
mairlylindor's avatar
ahsoka controlls her destiny how cool is that
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lordhadrian's avatar
:):)  I am glad you enjoyed it :):)
DragoRoku's avatar
Whats with the big pause between the next pages?
lordhadrian's avatar
Just waiting for the artist to get the next page finished.
Crimsonight's avatar
There is no fate but what we make for ourselves!
Sorry, couldn't resist :D

Ventress is kind of sappy through here, but it's needed for the character revolution that comes. This really is an awesome story. Thank you for commissioning your stories into comics. It's a new and different way to enjoy them that I, and many others I'm sure, appreciate very much. :D
lordhadrian's avatar
I get very excited every time Liunors puts out even a wip.  He just brings a scene to life so nicely :):)  And this gets better and better with each page :):)
Blackheart010's avatar
Are they going to rescue Barriss from execution? But much love and respect to Dying of the Light
lordhadrian's avatar
Yes!  And I encourage you to let :iconliunors: know you want him to finish more pages :):)  I cannot wait to see more!!
TheWizardofOzbourne's avatar
Very good story, and the art is amazing!
lordhadrian's avatar
Thank you very much :):)
DragoRoku's avatar
This is getting exciting. How many more pages left to go?
lordhadrian's avatar
Liunors thinks it will be all together 20 pages, so we have about 9 more maybe (??) But it is exciting!! :):)
DragoRoku's avatar
Looks more like 7 more to go. Estimate for completion?
lordhadrian's avatar
Yes, 7 (My brain is fried from numbers, lol) I think Liunors might be able to finish it in 6-8 months maybe??  He has a steady pace, but he is getting faster :):)
DragoRoku's avatar
Also I am finding a lot of grammar errors in your pages. You sure you have someone proof red it first before posting it?
lordhadrian's avatar
My older work needs fixing, lol....
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