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Seldom do people get to do their hearts desire: Usman Hanif is one such lucky braggart (although he doesn't readily admit it). After protracted suffering at the hands of unsympathetic teachers and class-fellows alike, nowadays he enjoys the perfect marriage of interests as a professional struct engineer and wildlife enthusiast. On weekends, Usman Hanif enjoys life on the road, in the wilderness and away from civilization...
Furthermore he does all of this for free and records random moments from life in hd with his pack of reluctant adventurer friends.

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Redwall, Chronicle of a death foretold, The idiot, Life of Pi
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Lemony Snicket, Brian jacques, Gabriel Garcia Marquez, Fyodor Dostoevsky
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Half Life, Portal 2, Grey Matter, Stronghold, bioshock, DOTA2
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PC
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Guitaring, sketching, photography, exploring

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well well well
you are absolutely right about these punctuations... and the worst thing that i cant overcome is that i cant proof it after writing the first draft. i just cant proof read whole of the hectic effort that i made to write it down... but now i am again and again doing it. every time a mistake pops out and it makes some improvement.

second thing... english aint my native language and i have been too long in technical field that i have started getting my language technically weaker day by day! Its like you know something and then you abandon it and when you come back later you start feeling it slipping away from you! (yes I have started reading novels again) and for sure today I would start looking back at the good ol’ grammar again!

The worst part with thinking via right side of brain is that you lose control of time and space. And you have to be so strong in expression media that in that trance when you are creating some plot in your brain, the things come out hit the right words at the right time and the piece becomes ready to scare the world with your imagination. But for that you have to be strong in your communicative language that you don’t have to come outta trance to look for the word to express what you wanted to say. Yes I was saying about the worst part. The worst part is that the things that are transferred to the paper are like disconnected pieces which only make sense in your brain; not in the reader’s when he/she reads it. (I guess you are getting what I want to say).

but that was an awesome critique to have, yes i will improve it with more proofing and the things you suggested. hah long time i havent written anything. and if you allow me to ask for a favor, can you please check two or three of my other writings (only if you have time)? i would love to hear from you on those! :)

and i would stay in touch with you and expect guidance from you!

thank you again for your time. Thats so nice of you and it meant like a teacherly sort of thing. and i respect my mentors like hell! thank you marm! :)
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