This is just your basic, clean VW ad. And like every other VW ad, it's all about the car. Well, maybe a little about the plane, but mostly about the car... 
Feedback and comments are appreciated!
-- Michael Bankston, AKA "LoneGunman"
Feedback and comments are appreciated!-- Michael Bankston, AKA "LoneGunman"
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A few errors in the execution, as kedikumu points out, but this is good enough to want me swap out my current wallpaper.
Just too bad it isn't available in a higher resolution, but that's your call and I can see why
I have a 99 GTI 2.0T and love it
Great concept btw.
could you send it to me pls...
I love VW's <333
vw for life!
NICE, thats now a poster on my wall(I own an 04 GTI 1.8T)
As for me, I would have cropped the whole thing more towards the left, making both the plane and the car towards the right. The car is 2/3 in the visual, but the impression of the whole thing, especially the car looks 'centralized'.
Make some adjustment to the photoshop works as some had commented. Especially the windscreens' lightings and reflection, motion and the shadow.
Love both the copywriting. But I would have just use the 'Drivers Wanted'. It seems like both the copy are stealing the limelight. The visual itself can tell the audience that you are 'flying'. Use smaller point font for 'Drivers Wanted', a 12-14 point (in an A4 landscape layout, scale accordingly to your size). If you insist on using the copy and the VW logo that way, I suggest you shift both of these to the right.
I'm not sure if the MB logo is the car dealer or your name, I suggest you remove this if you a putting it in your book.
Cheers.
My buddy is getting me into VWs. I love the picture. I just showed him, and he wants a copy of it. Keep it up!
did u shot this whole scene or is it photo manipulation???
my only meager suggestion would be to give the plane a little more motion blur or something because it kinda takes away from the car.
^^ inspired by his vw ideas? looks cool man, not a fasn of the punchlines though
Was this a real ad you developed for VW? I hope so, because if they see this they will probably steal it!
Good work, and good job making the concept work!
hope you enjoy