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Current Residence: Netherlands, Utrecht
deviantWEAR sizing preference: L
Favourite genre of music: Trance, Dance
Favourite style of art: Pixel Art
Operating System: WinXP
MP3 player of choice: My own

Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Daft Punk, Tiësto
Favourite Games
Nikujin, Cavestory and lots of other small games
Favourite Gaming Platform
PC
Tools of the Trade
MSpaint mostly
Other Interests
Computers, Juggling, Swimming, Art

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lollige commented on htf Nelly by DoodleBug13
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Yes yes, very cute and recognizable, but by some more knowledge of your tools it could improve a lot!
I suppose you made this in Paint? Luckily I know a bit about that <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)" />
At first, Never Ever save stuff as JPG in Paint. It really ruins your work <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" title=":( (Sad)" />

Back to the artistic part: You used thin lines for the eye and the head, while you used thick lines for the rest. Why not do thick lines everywhere? I like those thick lines, and the more the better in this case <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />. You can change the thickness of the lines by going to the straight line, set thickness, and then make your circle with the circle tool.
as for the hand drawn lines, you get more fluid lines by using the curved line tool. Practise with it, it will be useful <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />
I really like the lashes on the blink, they work great, but on the open eye you need to connect those lashes in a more stylish way <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)" />
keep it up!
htf Nelly
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I just figured I had not favved it yet! Silly me.
I love it!

The idea is funny, it fits the function (as it is going to be printed on paper as far as I can understand), the character is nice and funny, and of course everlything is well drawn!

The complimentary colors of course work great together, and your cartoony style can only be loved by everyone. Good linework, as well as on design as on thickness of lines and usage of black.

However I do have some problems, and the biggest one is the nose. Yes, of course it is supposed to be ugly but as it should be a nice drawing it should be appealing too <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)" />. I like it being different in color from the rest, but this is just a bit too annoying for my taste. Maybe not having those outer 'spots' on his nose extra saturated would already fix it for a part, I do not know what else to do that quickly.

I love the idea of the chewing on the paper, but it took just a bit to long for me to notice it was paper the first time. The part in his mouth looks like cloth actually.
The shading on his right (our left) cheek looks misplaced, maybe even a highlight would have made him more cute. Also I think there should be some shading at the bottom of the creature to make him more roundish, and so cutish and touchable. (when I made a typo the corrector said 'unfetchable >.<&#039<img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)" />

Oh well, I am loving the eyebrow, and the little hat and horns give him character! With just a little amount of lines, you made the full thing look like a hairball, and I envy you for your talent and skill <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />
Paper Eater Monster
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Worm attacks? It took a while too see the actual worm, there is not much focus on it, but the expressions are very nice and matching the theme at the end <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />.

I really like the red apple. Her face is just a bit too much to the left, so it is out of the real apple shape, but furthermore it fits perfectly. Only her chin sticks out, but that is not really a problem. However, on the green one you can see a huge flat face that is placed in the wrong direction compared to the way the apple curves, and it looks really horrible! It is like the apple wears a flat paper mask! With this angle of face picture, you might have better centered the face on the apple!
Also, the worm which would now be the main theme does not add much to the drawing.

I really like the way you have been able to make the skin PERFECTLY appleish, well done on that! Especially on the red one!
worm attack