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My Naruto Oc Love Kukoroshi by Lolalilacs My Naruto Oc Love Kukoroshi by Lolalilacs
Love has been my Naruto Oc for a long time now xD
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So, pretty! :) I luv this poses! You always know how to make the poses look so awesome! :) The outfit is new? :P So, Is the contests still going or not? Cuz, I'm detailing it now. Funny thing is its going to be the color black and white justs like this almosts! But, I seeya like thoses Ninja-shoes so, I'll keep them. But, Hey! You want me to keep the waists band on her left on there? Or no? I luv her hair so I so keeping that down. It suits her more and her pretty personality. And would you mind if I add something? like a symbol of The sins of Fire? Its the team Kazuza made from his old village in the lands of fire. If I told ya? I think I did?! Oh, yeah I did told ya so far of the story. But, do you want to keep the black thing there or no? I keep the necklace. Justs tell me plz so, I could make sure I got this right?! Thxz :) Yeah I talk to much! :rofl:
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Critique by Supyloco Apr 30, 2011, 3:24:42 PM
I like it personally. But this one looks very familiar since it sort of looks like an OC from a friend. But yeah I believe you did a good job here. To be honest I don't know what you need to improve since well it's much better than any of the crap I can make. Keep drawing because you definitely have some talent. And talent is never to be doubted. I hope you still make more drawings of this character and hopefully create more OC's. As you practice more I believe you will get better and I hope I wasn't too discouraging.
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FireInAurora Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love her hair it looks like a tail
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:iconlolalilacs:
Lolalilacs Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
xD
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LordDico Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Student Writer
cool!
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:iconlolalilacs:
Lolalilacs Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
ty
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Never-Forget-Me-Not Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
I like how her headband is her bracelet <3
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Lolalilacs Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
ty ^^
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Never-Forget-Me-Not Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
your welcome <3
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Lolalilacs Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
^^
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Niqua10023 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I meant to write that in the Critique abotu the art work O_O' sorry
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Lolalilacs Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
lol xD k
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Niqua10023 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
:D Haha yupperz!
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Niqua10023 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
This is going to say the same thing from the bottom to make sure ya got this well, at the end its different. So, pretty! :) I luv this poses! You always know how to make the poses look so awesome! :) The outfit is new? :P So, Is the contests still going or not? Cuz, I'm detailing it now. Funny thing is its going to be the color black and white justs like this almosts! But, I seeya like thoses Ninja-shoes so, I'll keep them. But, Hey! You want me to keep the waists band on her left on there? Or no? I luv her hair so I so keeping that down. It suits her more and her pretty personality. And would you mind if I add something? like a symbol of The sins of Fire? Its the team Kazuza made from his old village in the lands of fire. If I told ya? I think I did?! Oh, yeah I did told ya so far of the story. But, do you want to keep the black thing there or no? I keep the necklace. Justs tell me plz so, I could make sure I got this right?! Thxz :) Yeah I talk to much! :rofl:

Like, right here is the end But, I luv this its to pretty! Keep it up hun! ♥
Yours truley Ni-Ni Sama!
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Niqua10023 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
So, pretty! :) I luv this poses! You always know how to make the poses look so awesome! :) The outfit is new? :P So, Is the contests still going or not? Cuz, I'm detailing it now. Funny thing is its going to be the color black and white justs like this almosts! But, I seeya like thoses Ninja-shoes so, I'll keep them. But, Hey! You want me to keep the waists band on her left on there? Or no? I luv her hair so I so keeping that down. It suits her more and her pretty personality. And would you mind if I add something? like a symbol of The sins of Fire? Its the team Kazuza made from his old village in the lands of fire. If I told ya? I think I did?! Oh, yeah I did told ya so far of the story. But, do you want to keep the black thing there or no? I keep the necklace. Justs tell me plz so, I could make sure I got this right?! Thxz :) Yeah I talk to much! :rofl:

Kazuza- (Thats Hott/Smexy Hun!) :iconnosebleedplz:

Me- xD Lol What a pervert! :rofl:
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Lolalilacs Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
You talk fine xD and sure i dont mind ya keeping some of the stuff on there and also the contest is still running and i dont mind
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Niqua10023 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Oh, alrigth ^_^ Making sure.
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vannbun Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks soooo cool :iconcrazyblushplz:
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Lolalilacs Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
XD THANK CHU!
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very pretty! i like her hair and her pose. very fenemine. i cant spell. a few pointers, one try and make her toes more definite. perhaps instead of just the tips, draw the line in a bit deeper, to avoid the playdoh blobby look. her black stripe shoulder thing is pretty and i understand it is your design for a outfit but think as if you were the ninja, wouldnt it restrict your movement, something important to a ninja? i apologize if this is any way offends you but those are the things that irk me the most. as well, she seems a bit pale. her shading on her arms, though well placed seem much to dark for her fair skin tone. lighten that up, it looks to strong and harsh, try using a lighter palette, just take a sample of her main skin colour and adjust it untill it is just a bit darker. it would make the shadows more realistic, as they play better, and melt into the skin maker it more lifelike. im rambling arent i? well thats all, but overall a nice picture :)
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Lolalilacs Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
alright xD
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shizuce-bluefire Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love this!~
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Lolalilacs Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks xD
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shizuce-bluefire Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcome :3
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Lolalilacs Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
x3
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