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Dancing On Clouds by Lolalilacs Dancing On Clouds by Lolalilacs
Dirk & Jane

I saw a post of Tumblr of these two in a set of sprites felt like drawing them the outfit ideas don't belong to me they come from here.

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Homestuck belongs to: Andrew Hussie
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One thing that strikes me about this is that it looks like a photograph, not sure if that's intentional but it looks nice. The proportions of everything in the picture give it enough depth for a ball room. Though it makes me wonder what shape the room really is, because for some reason it gives me the impression that it should be round and it looks rectangular the way it is now. The outlines in the background are too thick compared to the lines on the characters. The coloring style also seems a bit inconsistent when comparing the banners and drapery to Dirk's outfit which appears soft due to the texture used. Jane's hair seems kind of like a helmet from the way the highlights were added to it, but I understand that it's trying to show how many different clumps of hair she has which was more properly executed on Dirk with the soft browns used. Then the design on the floor is an interesting concept and appears to have turned out well, making me think of the saying "on cloud nine" which I think fits well here. Both Dirk and Jane's expressions clearly show that they're enjoying themselves. With all of that said, I really like the picture and I think you did a nice job overall! =]
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ThatCrazyShipper Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Student
Omgomgomgomgomgomgomglove
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Lolalilacs Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
LOL
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ThatCrazyShipper Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Student
OKAY SO YOU WANTED ME TO SLEEPOVER LEMME CHECK W/ MY DAD.
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Lolalilacs Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
LOL ok
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