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I can still see your eyes
Hear your terrified voice
Feel your shaking hands
But you said as long as it would keep me safe
My heart is breaking
But Iím proud of you
Iím honored to have a person like you in my life
My tears will fall till the day
I see you home safe
My prayers wonít stop
Till I see you again
My chest feels empty
My head is screaming
My spirit is saddened
I want so badly to see you again
Just to let you know how much you mean to me
To let you know how much I think about you
You are the first and last thing I think about before bed
And the first and only thing the next day
I am so afraid to lose you
Your voice keeps playing in my head
ďAt least I know Iím doing it for you,
You and all my friends
Thatís whatís important
That you be safe thatís all Iím worried aboutĒ
I never knew you even cared till that moment
Now I donít want to lose you
I look up to the sky every night and I pray
Do you hear me?
I cry each night you are there
Do you hear me?
My heart aches for you
Can you feel it?
Be safe my hero
Come home to me

Ö.~My Hero~.Ö
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orig pic by ~onpaintedwings

i just added knife palette filter with neon pink over top
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toez Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2004
you are a great poet. lots of emotion here
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lockedinside Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2004
:hug: thanks i appreciate that
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Aviatrix-Girl Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2004
veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery good!!
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lockedinside Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2004
thanks
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KristinaMetro Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2004
It reminds me of all the poor families and young couples ripped apart by war and all the soilders getting sent overseas. Sad poem, but a very good one at that.
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lockedinside Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2004
thanks
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Silver-Rage Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2004
Wow very powerful n meaningful.
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lockedinside Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2004
:hug: thanks
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Silver-Rage Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2004
U r welcome :hug:
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