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There is a lonely child in the heart of a cold vindictive world.
It is a lonely child who has nothing or anyone to call his own.
He sits alone in a pitch-black chamber.
Surrounded by nightmares overflowing by abhorrence that is tainted.

All around him there is nothing but darkness.
All inside him there is nothing but sadness.
All he looks for is a way out of his madness.
Nevertheless, there is nothing for this lonely child’s potential happiness.

The lonely child runs and runs from what is sinister and in the dark,
He tries to find someone or something that he would be able to love.
He fails to find anything, so the world he starts to abhor.
He looks in the mirror and the reflection shows a lonely child in a cold cruel world which he starts to adore.

He looks down at himself and sees nothing but misery,
For the world sees him the same way, unimportant and invisible.
A lonely child with rampaging emotions acquires a paper and pencil,
A poem he writes, just like this one, in hopes to make himself noticeable and visible.

An ocean of repressed and unheard emotions are written,
And the only people who read them are to him significant.
Thanks for reading what this lonely child was thinking and has now written.
Knowing that you take your time to read this makes me feel as if I am existent.

A poem I made - hope you like - Made while thinking about sad thoughts. *shrugs*

Btw - The picture was not made or taken by me - the link is

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Many-eyeshere Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2007  Student Writer
I love it, the way you malipulate the words is amazing.
You completely control the reader in this piece and I' very impressed by that.
Your description and tone I felt was especially good.
Great work;)
Lloan Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. :) :hug:
Cuan-Leanabh Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2007
Wow, very creative and moving! Picture goes well, too.
Lloan Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
thanks very much ^^
Cuan-Leanabh Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2007
No problem! =)
johnathanpartin Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2007
Dude, I have felt like that from time to time and still do. So, I do understand where your coming from. Great poem. Kodos
Lloan Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot :)
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