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I'm trying out shorter pages to try to get more out. Let me know what you guys think in the comments below.
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Brendan looks nice with white/silver hair.
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:icongamer2332:
gamer2332 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 27, 2015
Actually, Brendan's hair isn't white! That's just a hat.
{s}I'm such a nerd...{/s}
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:iconlizdoodlez:
LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I'm well aware that actual Brendan's hair isn't white. But this one has white hair.
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angelneko88 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love the shading! Nice work!
We will see the festival now, don't we?
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Heartsinclaire Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
it took me a second to realize that the kid was Brendan, pfft I was confused as to who the random kid was Sweating a little...  XI
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LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Happens. XD
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Wilted-Camellia Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
I will try to offer constructive stuff to say this time (for once)...

Hmm, I think you've improved. Good shading. The second panel looks a little off perspective wise where Brendan is concerned (may just be me, but he looks a little squashed somehow. He seems the right height for the doorway he just past so *shrugs* can't really say why). Panel 1, 3, and 5 are good at showing running - a lot of people aren't good at the in motion stuff, but you draw him tilted forward with arm movement. If I can tell there's movement without the speed lines, then I consider it meets my standards for good. The thing that is the most off here, in my opinion, is the building backgrounds. I see you used the whole perspective line thing, which is good, but compared to your other lines... they're  too perfect - you know, they're too straight click and pull computer-like lines if that makes any sense. It makes the background feel separate from the rest of the piece and they look blocky (I know, I know. What else are buildings supposed to look like? Spherical?). Is there a way to... hand/tablet draw while using that as a guide line? Sorry, I'm not a digital artist. I mostly do graphite, charcoal, and some airbrushing stuff, so I don't know what to recommend for that. Also, the sidewalk should probally look raised above the road instead of on  the same level, and the building could have some alleyways or at least not be so perfectly lined up (one might be set back further than the other). Sorry, nitpicky stuff, but I want to be helpful.

Was I? Was I? Please say yes!
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Leafeon08 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm liking the shorter page; you can fit more in without it seeming a little cramped. Also, I'm noticing the softer coloring and shading; very nice, especially in the third picture.
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LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks. :)
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minarui Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ohh, shorter pages seem nice!
It doesn't take a lot of time to draw and it always has you wanting more.
Like why is Brendan blushing for example heh owo
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LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's also good practice for when I want to do more original stuff. Or want to ever print this series as a book or something.
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