Shop Forum More Submit  Join Login
Teen's Play Issue 1 Page 5 by LiyuConberma Teen's Play Issue 1 Page 5 by LiyuConberma
I'm telling ya, coloring it and inking it at the same time ain't easy job at all! When you're using Photoshop to color it in detail, now I understand the pain of the coloring part for those people who work in Archie. I pity them, honestly.

Anyway, back on topic, I know it's been a while to see this new page and a new character appear!!! I named him Darren the Hedgehog, some of you guys have been asking me who this character is, now I'm giving you an answer.

He is Black Doom!! No kidding, I've designed him into a hedgehog, long before he transform into an alien, long story, but I'll give you more detail sooner I finish the rest of my other works.

Besides it, peace out and don't forget to leave a comment! Read and review, people!!!

--

Previous Page: [link]

Next Pages: [link]
Add a Comment:
 
:iconwitswithme:
While I admit that Black Doom isn't my favorite Sonic character, THIS incarnation is a character I'm liking already. I love the costumes you gave to Sonic, Shadow, and Silver as well. Your drawing style reminds me of the Archie Comics...almost as if you were one of their artists... You'll have to let me in on your drawing secrets.
Heh, I also have to say that your story is great. My only nitpick is the awkward transition from the children to the adults/teens, though this is probably because I haven't read Children's Play yet.

All in all, I'm loving the story; keep up the awesome work!
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
45 out of 45 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconcharliethetrex:
Although I am somewhat unfamiliar with the popular Sonic series, including games, I must say that this some amazing artwork. The style is very on point, unlike quite a handful of artists attempting to draw fan art, and would have nearly fooled me into believing you were actually one of the show's artists. On the topic of the visuals, it also captures emotions quite clearly, and mountain lines are used, which is something I love to see in other people's art, that expresses certain emotions mountain lines work for. The comic was well organized, used proper flow and motion, and pulls any viewers out there in, and leaves them pondering on the idea of what happens next.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
2 out of 2 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconartisticninjacat:
ArtisticNinjaCat Featured By Owner May 3, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the last panel! Lol
Reply
:iconokamijubei:
OkamiJubei Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2018
Oh no... Trail is going to get it, isn't he?
Reply
:iconla-hbm:
LA-HBM Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018
:thankyou:
Reply
:iconnightcaster460:
Nightcaster460 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2018   Digital Artist
Isn't he just a...
Reply
:icontrainzskeleton1225:
TrainzSkeleton1225 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Black Doom got sh00kened. 
Reply
:icongaruru09:
Garuru09 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Darren.exe has stopped working
Reply
:icon00rockeron:
00RockerOn Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2017
This looks bad... And in color!
Reply
:iconceleste651:
Celeste651 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2017  Student Artist
XD nice. 
Reply
:icon00rockeron:
00RockerOn Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2017
:bow: Thank you, thank you, hold the applause, thank you! :bow:
Reply
:iconceleste651:
Celeste651 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2017  Student Artist
XD
Reply
:iconkmgaming29:
Kmgaming29 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yea it is a bitch😂
Reply
:iconthelobsterlover:
thelobsterlover Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2017  Student Artist
Yeah colouring with photoshop is a pain in the but
Reply
:iconpandaqueen12:
pandaqueen12 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2017
not bad
Reply
:iconnikkie-k:
NikkiE-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2017  Student Interface Designer
That's Sonic for you. Just says "yo" to any stranger he meets. XD
Reply
:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2017  Student General Artist
Yep ^^
Reply
:iconnikkie-k:
NikkiE-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2017  Student Interface Designer
XD

I just live this! Your story is AMAZING!!!!! I LOVE how you created not just one story, but an ENTIRE universe!!! I can't wait to read more! :)
Reply
:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2017  Student General Artist
Well, it wasn't suppose to be THIS big, but it just happened ^^ Funny how originally it would be just the SSS physically changed into toddlers and have tons of baby fun. But back then, I was also a big of fantasy and it's been redone with the idea of them being turned into babies. So I was thinking, 'why not make this crazier and bigger?'

It's crazy how you guys like the universe I created so far. ^^
Reply
:iconnikkie-k:
NikkiE-K Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017  Student Interface Designer
It's not crazy at all. You deserve it after all the hardwork you've put into making it! ^^

It's like they say, the greatest stories come from the simplest ideas. That is how every fantastic stpry works: it starts out as a "what if...." and turns into a world or universe. THAT is exactly what you have accomplished with this! :icontruestoryplz:
Reply
:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017  Student General Artist
Honestly, i never would hav touched Sonic archie comic book if it werent for my trip to England when i stumbled upon a random issue (i only knew SonicX back then), and with mt beginning of deviantart. ^^
Reply
:iconnikkie-k:
NikkiE-K Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017  Student Interface Designer
Awesome! :) I just happened to find them when I got my NOOK for Christmas a few years ago and searched for Sonic in the NOOK store.

I guess fate hit both of us in the face! XD
Reply
:iconveronwoon:
veronwoon Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2016
Darren Beelzebub
Shadow Beelzebub
(faints)
Reply
:icond-the-draconequus:
D-the-Draconequus Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2016
This is amazing. I like how you made Darren, Black Doom. :)
Reply
:iconannielove99:
AnnieLove99 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2015
Love Sonic x)
Reply
:iconawesome126753:
Awesome126753 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2015  Student Filmographer
Yo
Reply
:iconbysthedragon:
Bysthedragon Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
XD before I read the description I took one look at lord Darren and was like,
Wait a sec...HOLY SHIT IT'S BLACK DOOM! 
Reply
:icondiamondchick64:
DiamondChick64 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Shadow, your quills are covering Silvers face. XD
Reply
:iconthecuteverivane:
theCuteVerivane Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
That's the Sonic I know xDD 
Why is shadow so calm? Isn't he a little bit worried that there is a hedgehog similar to him in front of him? And has some of Black Doom's signtaure items, like the necklace??
Loving this so far :'3
Reply
:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2015  Student General Artist
Well, I was young and didn't think much back then XP
Reply
:iconthecuteverivane:
theCuteVerivane Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
hahah, actually, you're not the only one xDD
It's been like 2 years since the first time I saw this comic
And I didn't notice that until now xDD
Reply
:iconsolarchaser334:
SolarChaser334 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol last panel so casual 
Reply
:icondrawtwist:
DrawTwist Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
But actually, how....
I mean..... Darren seems to be such a nice hedgehog.
It must have been an accident
Something evil must've happened to him!
He can't do this on purpose!!!!
Being an alien was an accident right!!! Right!!?!?!?
Reply
:icondrawtwist:
DrawTwist Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
But how can he be Black Doom.
Darren seems to be the nice guy!
It's hard to believe him turning in to an evil character!!!!
Reply
:iconarielbaskett:
ARIELBASKETT Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is he seriously Black Doom?
Reply
:iconeggmanhater:
EggmanHater Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Student General Artist
Darren:Shocked 
Sonic:America (Yo) [V6]  Yo.
Reply
:iconmutantninjacake:
MutantNinjaCake Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Sonic: Yo. 

Darren: •______• ........

Me: PFFFTHAHAHAHAHAHA
Reply
:iconstarz4life:
Starz4Life Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Darren:.....O.O
Reply
:icondragokaiju2000:
dragokaiju2000 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Daren's like: WHAT THE HELL!?! XD
Reply
:iconsfoanni4c:
Sfoanni4c Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yo.
Reply
:iconrandomshizandjunk:
randomshizandjunk Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014
I LOVE IT WHEN SONIC SAY YO XD
Reply
:iconsonadowfangirl004:
sonadowfangirl004 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Real smooth, Sonic, real smooth. XD
Reply
:iconnightcore2014:
Nightcore2014 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
XD you gotts LOVE Sonic in this.
Reply
:iconhedgehogsrule412:
Hedgehogsrule412 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Student
sonic is so calm XD just a "yo"
Reply
:iconsonicteers:
Sonicteers Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well you need to remember, sonic has been sent into different dimensions before, so he's use to this kinda thing.
Reply
:iconhedgehogsrule412:
Hedgehogsrule412 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student
True dat
Reply
:iconivansonicstory:
IvanSonicStory Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
That's Sonic! I love him!
Reply
:iconthecrazyrandomfan:
thecrazyrandomfan Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Baka that's what you are sonic an idiot
Reply
:iconfeatherlynnexwarrior:
FeatherlynneXWarrior Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Writer
Sonic: Yo.

Darren: ........
Reply
:iconxxangelpeacexxda:
xXangelpeaceXxDA Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL HIS FACE XD
Reply
:iconwerehogdog:
werehogdog Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Sonic that is NOT the right thing to say.
Reply
:iconxxangelpeacexxda:
xXangelpeaceXxDA Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No kidding xD
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×




Details

Submitted on
May 17, 2010
Image Size
2.0 MB
Resolution
1401×2028
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
85,091 (4 today)
Favourites
919 (who?)
Comments
595
Downloads
220

Camera Data

Make
Canon
Model
Canon DIGITAL IXUS 800 IS
Shutter Speed
1/30 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
6 mm
Date Taken
May 12, 2010, 8:38:15 PM