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Teen's Play Issue 1 Page 10-11 by LiyuConberma Teen's Play Issue 1 Page 10-11 by LiyuConberma
First of all, thank you for the points that you guys donated. OVER 800 POINTS, WOW!! I was amazed by the speed and the generosity from you guys. That means a lot. *sniff*

Secondly, Summer is here!!! >w< YAHOOOO!!!! Anyway, that means I have more time to continue my unfinished works. Well, you know what I mean. So, this is just a start, hope you guys will like it.

And finally, sorry for delay to the ones who I asked to help me do the coloring effects. Even though summer is here, I still have works to do and times to kill. (Overall, I'm still busy, but I will arrange it. ^^|||)





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So, what do you think? Don't think, COMMENT, PEOPLE!! ^W^

DON'T FLAMES ON ME!!




Sonic, Shadow, and Silver the Hedgehogs belong to :iconsegaplz:

Kaze, Sapphire, Darren, and Trails belong to me :iconliyuconberma:
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It's simply wonderful :D
you shouldn't doubt your skill it's really great.
They way you color, draw and how you came up with it and I'm sure that the people here thinks the same that "it's a wonderful comic and it's simply great" and also I'm sure they want more :D

They story is really great and I'm already excitetd about what's gonna happen next and I'm sure the others who's been reading your comic is also waiting for it.

Keep it up, it's great and that's the true words I can tell ya, we'll be waiting for more as soon as you have time :D
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:iconsplatau:
Splatau Featured By Owner May 30, 2018  Student Artist
Shadow is like- Sonic omg stfu
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:iconkyooshi4000da:
Kyooshi4000DA Featured By Owner May 26, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh thank you they’re not dead
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:iconartisticninjacat:
ArtisticNinjaCat Featured By Owner May 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't read the last panel
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:icondaybreak-fan:
Daybreak-Fan Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2018
Well at least Darren isn't evil....But I'm watching him.
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:iconbakavola:
Bakavola Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
hahahaha so stupid sonic xDDDD
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s-equals-k-log-w Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017
Nice perspective on that right page. I love surreal effects that are still realistic enough to make sense and I can still get some feel for the 3D space.
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:icon00rockeron:
00RockerOn Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2017
They aren't the same ones you think guys...
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:iconnikkie-k:
NikkiE-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2017  Student Interface Designer
Shadow's faaaaaace!!!!! X"D
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:icontobyandmavisforever:
TobyandMavisforever Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016  Student General Artist
Silver's so cute when he's a peacemaker! :aww:
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:iconruthxshadow143:
RuthXShadow143 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
HAHAHAHA DOUBLE FAKERS HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
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:iconbakavola:
Bakavola Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
jajaajajajajajaj XDDD 
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:iconprincessrachelblueo:
PrincessRachelBlueo Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Yup, nothing changed
Sonic:Yo Shadow who's your Cousin? He looks just like you! Double Faker! XD
i love this comic
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:iconbakavola:
Bakavola Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
HAHAHAHAAHAH ME TOOO 
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:iconeggmanhater:
EggmanHater Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Student General Artist
Results:
pretty much nothing changed!
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EggmanHater Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Student General Artist
Sonic:
Smart-alek?Checkmark Icon 
Poor timing?Checkmark Icon 
Irritates the crap out of Shadow?Checkmark Icon Checkmark Icon 

Silver:
Peacemaker?Checkmark Icon 
Passive style of statements?Checkmark Icon 
Tries to rein Sonic in?Checkmark Icon 

Shadow:
Thinking about being surrounded by idiots?RDJ Maybe PLZ RDJ Maybe PLZ 
Frown?Checkmark Icon 
Irritated by Sonic?Checkmark Icon Checkmark Icon Checkmark Icon Checkmark Icon Checkmark Icon Checkmark Icon Checkmark Icon Checkmark Icon 
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RexfineMutts Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this comic! It's so funny and awesome! Amazing art, I love it! :D
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GraceBenGiven Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol, sonic is stepping on Silvs head :D
I cant read what it says on the last panel of page 11, could someone please tell me what theyre saying?
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:iconcolorwolf06:
ColorWolf06 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
LiyuConberma? There's a misspelling on page 10, panel 3. "Checking" should be "check".
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:iconmrihaveasword:
MrIHaveASword Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Kind of hard to read the panel in the last page.
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:iconsfoanni4c:
Sfoanni4c Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Sonic, quit standing on Silver's head.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student General Artist
XD he couldn't help it
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student General Artist
XD he couldn't help it
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:iconsfoanni4c:
Sfoanni4c Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah, but still.
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:iconeeveelover64:
EeveeLover64 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Out of all the hedgehogs, it usually Silver I like the most. Mostly because psychic powers and stuff. I just started reading this comic, and I already love how you depict the whole trio! I especially love Shadow. Just...His face. it reminds me of this --> :iconshadowrageplz:
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:iconzoraarmorlink:
zoraarmorlink Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014
That is EXACTLY what I thought
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student General Artist
I know, that face of his is CLASSIC XD
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:iconnova2711:
Nova2711 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol shadows face. XD
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Yep XD
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:iconnova2711:
Nova2711 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Student General Artist
:-)
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fallingstarthepony Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
what does it say in the last panel?
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:iconpsfreak2012:
PSfreak2012 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
What why do we need points?
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ABCSKW123 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
LOL Shadow's face. I died. I died right there.
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:iconstormyrobotnick:
StormyRobotnick Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't read the bottom of the right page, cuz the words are a little blurry
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sonicamy04 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
who is Trails?
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:iconluyiji:
Luyiji Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Omg shadows last face in that panel
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:iconsoliorra:
Soliorra Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh GOD Double Faker. Shadow's face too. That killed me. ahahahah. Amazing work.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
lol right?
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:iconsoliorra:
Soliorra Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah
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Masked-Steamroller Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
On the vine panel, did ANYONE but me think that "I've seen enough hentai to know where this is going?"
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MGartist Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Professional General Artist
I like sonic's dialogue in the last panel of page 11.you really captured the personalities of the sonic characters btw. Feels like it would be exactly what the characters would say if this story was made by Sega. You should definitely work for Sega btw. I like the creativity that you have with the sonic characters. :)
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks, I also surprised that SHard also said "Yo." at Elias when he first met the Secret Freedom Fighters. ^^

I'm glad that you guys like this comic.
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bluerose5 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
too funny!
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mariam3the6cat9 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Epic comic♡
Everything in it is just perfect.
Only on thing.
Wasn't trails eyes brown colored?
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Rubyred2170 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
I love this story. Man , I wish my Character could be in this story it would be awesome.
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1vampireAlpha52 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Writer
lol on Shadow's face in the last panel.
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:iconmetalshadowinsanity:
metalshadowinsanity Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
DARREN????!!!!!! I THOUGHT IT WAS BADASS FUTURE SHADOW! STILL IS EPIC THOUGH!!
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:iconmessed-up-jinx:
Messed-Up-Jinx Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love it! :)
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:iconneokasey82:
neokasey82 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OH MY GOSH SHADOW'S FACE! :XD:
You should make that face into a plz. O.o
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:icon321pietime:
321PieTime Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I LOVE PLANT MONSTERS!!! :squee:
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:iconsonicranger-1:
SonicRanger-1 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOL! They sure haven't changed! XD
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