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Children's Play Issue1 pg4 by LiyuConberma Children's Play Issue1 pg4 by LiyuConberma
Well, here you go! The new page of Children's Play. Hope you enjoy it even though it's only two panels, but it's a good process so far with this issue. Hopefully I could get the next one up very soon! XD

And finally we get the first glimpse of the baby SSS, and don't worry, there will be MORE to come! 

STAY TUNE!


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STORY created by ME!

Text edited by my Ghost Writer

Tails and Sally Acorn :iconsegaplz: and Archie (?)


Baby Sonic and Shadow's shoes designs</b> and SSS's pearl accessories belong to :iconsupasilver:</b>
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When it comes to artwork, most of it depends on the person looking at it. What they like to see in art including style and what they prefer when it comes to the way colors and story is presented through that artwork.
I think when it comes to this page of your comic specifically, you have the basics down and more.
Take the words out of this page for example: you can still tell what's going on thanks to body position and facial expression. You can see the interactions between the characters and know how they view each other and how they feel. You don't need the words.
The colors are also eye catching, they draw in the viewer and I find myself looking at the characters more than the words for story. I like how the line art is thicker for the characters closer to the page. Thicker lines have been known to be more appealing.
This page has a better view than the one before it, there isn't a lot of open space with nothing going on, and there isn't a bunch of characters clogging up the panel. Well done.
I think that if you keep creating pages like this, you will end up with an outstanding comic.
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:iconethantavitas:
EthanTavitas Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2018  Student Artist
I don't get it, where did they come from, and where are the original Sonic, Shadow and Silver?
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:iconrisstastic:
Risstastic Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Where has this been all my life??
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:iconbellaizumi13:
BellaIzumi13 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2018
OMG they are so freaking precious.
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:iconpyropuncherz:
PyroPuncherZ Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2017  Hobbyist
In the sonicverse this wouldn’t make sense cuz sonic is 15 and shadow is 50+ yrs old
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:iconstrider-hoshun:
strider-hoshun Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2018
Maybe age decreased by percentage, not strict number of years
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:icon00rockeron:
00RockerOn Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2017
Ah, Sonic and silver are scared. Shadow just looks grumpy, per the norm.
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:iconmaxout2:
Maxout2 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2017
Wha... wha... WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!

TAILS WHAT IN BLAZES DID YOU DO?!
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:iconcinus79:
Cinus79 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dude! You almost draw like artist, I mean you know in Archie comics :D
That's SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOL!!!
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:icondreamrays:
dreamrays Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2017  Hobbyist
sonic and silver scared and they're kids? FnaF Icon - Vincent (Shocked/Suprised)  
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:iconnazow:
nazow Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
they all seem Scared!?! Shadow doesn't look scared!
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:icondisneyprincessdawn:
DisneyPrincessDawn Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016  Student Artist
Penny (My OC): Don't worry, Sal, I know my cousin, no matter what age he is. And I know just how to get him out. AMY! WHERE ARE THE CHILI DOGS?!
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:iconbellamia28:
Bellamia28 Featured By Owner May 24, 2017
Big brother Shadow ... *squeees loudly*😍
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:iconspeedsterspeed95:
SpeedsterSpeed95 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016
lol baby sliver. so by this page this sonic and others are from the other time line, where grown up sonic and others are in correct?
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:iconanimenotaizai:
animenotaizai Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw! awww!!! Ans Shadow is protecting his little brothers!!!!! SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!! X3
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2016  Student General Artist
Thanks XD
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:iconanimenotaizai:
animenotaizai Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! ^^
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:iconthedarkshadow1990:
TheDarkShadow1990 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016
when will be next update be?
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2016  Student General Artist
Well, I'm happy to say that I just uploaded the new page ^^
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:iconthedarkshadow1990:
TheDarkShadow1990 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2016
ok
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BiggestFanAlive Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
awww so cute! and I love how protective you have made Shadow! its sooo sweet! love the protective big brother side of him, when he protect Sonic and Silver! Heart :happybounce: La la la la Love I am a dummy! Clap Heart Heart I think I've fainted. 
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IsaliShade Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2016
I agree 110%!! I so loove how he's protecting them! :love::la::love::la::love: Gives such a warm feeling :3
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2016  Student General Artist
Thanks XD
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:iconjayfoxfire:
jayfoxfire Featured By Owner Edited Sep 19, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww X3

Little Shadow: don't come near us!
Little Sonic:....S-She seems nice....
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:iconwinkpink360:
winkpink360 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016
Omg so cute and yet so sad. Dude somebody give them hugs
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Student General Artist
Thanks XD
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:iconzedzilver:
ZedZilver Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016
?
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Student General Artist
what? you don't understand the story or something?
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:iconzedzilver:
ZedZilver Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2016
Nope. I think I came right in the middle.
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:icondarkfire360:
darkfire360 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2016
Awww they're so cute!!! 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Student General Artist
Thanks XD
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:iconxmarkzx:
XmarkZX Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Youre damn right theyre cute auw
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:iconjjspeedpelt:
JJSpeedpelt Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016
Poor babies! D: Don't worry Sally offer the children chillidogs, that way you can slowly gain their trust. :D
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Student General Artist
Yea, poor babies must be hungry XD
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:iconflordeoro:
Flordeoro Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016
Im sure than Sally could fix it. She can handle every thing!
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:iconphatpandapo23:
PhatPandaPo23 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I wonder how Sally and tails are going to convince those three that they are friendly and trusting?
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Student General Artist
Oh, you just have to wait and see XD
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:iconphatpandapo23:
PhatPandaPo23 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Ok and I hope to read it soon.😉
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:icondohantakeda:
DohanTakeda Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2016
When will the next one come out
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Student General Artist
Hopefully soon, good news is that the inking is done, just need to colour render it.
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:iconshira-hedgie:
Shira-hedgie Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2016  Student Filmographer
awww...
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Student General Artist
Adorable, huh?
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:icondiamond-snowflake:
Diamond-Snowflake Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2016  Student General Artist
I love that serious look in Shadow's eyes. The lesser amount of gleam makes them look more intense!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Student General Artist
Thanks XD
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:iconotakuforthewin:
OtakuForTheWin Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I love the way Shadow is being a big older brother!
I love your work so much! You are awesome!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Student General Artist
Thanks XD
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:iconshining-aura:
Shining-Aura Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww Shadow being all protective is so cute!!!!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Student General Artist
Yea, I love Shadow's big brother protective side XD
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:iconflordeoro:
Flordeoro Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
Its me or... Sonic and Shadow are looking at Sally?
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:iconkesha365:
Kesha365 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2016
Gosh, they're cute! i got your heart 
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