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Diluted

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August 3, 2021
Diluted by LivelyDreamer13
Featured by Barosus
Suggested by DelightfulDolphin
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Reality diluted
They flounder,
Staring, muted;
A false expounder

Diluted reality
Mind polluted,
Hopeless wannabe;
All senses executed

Reality diluted
Fabricated scales,
Broken, persecuted;
All silly tales

Diluted reality
Ungifted soul,
Craving sensuality;
Loss of self-control

Reality diluted
Hero’s journey,
Clear, rooted;
Clogged by ferny

Diluted reality
Confusing babble,
Muddled decree;
Unheard, forgotten gabble

Reality diluted
To no return,
Pleasantly well-suited;
Straight to the urn
Is your reality diluted? How many others have reality diluted? Do you see the diluted reality? Or do you know someone stuck in diluted reality?

I've sure seen many diluted realities in my lifetime.

EDIT 08/03/21

Wow, I'm really happy this earned a Daily Deviation! I'm honored this more experimental poem of mine earned a place in today's Daily Deviations. <3

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ProDraft's avatar
LindArtz's avatar

Very Nice work!!! :clap: Congrats on your DD!!!

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LivelyDreamer13's avatar

Ahh, thank you so much!! I'm honored to have received another DD, especially on a poem I've had up for a little bit now. ;w;

Tinselfire's avatar

It has a nice beat.