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Forest path

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This is going to be submitted into the contest: "The Feeling of Autumn" hosted by #Beyond-borders, #Intermediate-Artists, #RisingArtists, and #feel-art.
Image details
Image size
3399x2632px 3.96 MB
Make
SONY
Model
DSLR-A200
Shutter Speed
1/6 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
55 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Nov 29, 2011, 8:14:16 AM
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fireheartsilverwind's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Alrighty,

I really love this picture! It has a nice, fresh feel, as if it just rained. The positions of the trees are so perfect as with the color of their leaves. The fallen log is a nice touch. You really captured the feel of autumn! The path is very nice and mysterious. The overcast look seriously screams fall to me ^^
There is also just enough green shrubs and grass so it doesn't look all one brown color, some good contrast. It also has a nice sense of space.

Overall, you really did a nice job! I would love to see more of your work, keep it up!

~FS
LiveInPix's avatar
You're right, It just stops raining when I took this picture.
Thanks a lot for your nice critique, I'm glad you like this one !
harrietsfriend's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

first impression is it's a nice and pleasant scene, worthy of a favorite.

it is missing something to focus on to go beyond great to awesome. a couple, a cyclist ripping through, or a horse, children or dog would all do.

the saturation or intensity is fine, but more would be better.

the framing is excellent, but taking out the top left white spot by cropping in 5% would take this distraction out.

I would darken the whole image about 10-20% to give the scene character or suspense.

fair is fair, you can view my gallery if you wish.

eugene
jchanders's avatar
Lovely scene and picture. Thank you for sharing it.  My sure  :+fav:       

 

:clap:      :wave:    :eyepopping:       :worship:      

LiveInPix's avatar
Thanks, glad you like this one !
MirachRavaia's avatar
Congratulations to the honorable mention in the "Autumn Colors" contest! You have been featured here: [link]
LiveInPix's avatar
Lot of thanks, I'm very honoured !
Cody-H's avatar
That's a very amazing photograph! It represents fall really well! :D
LiveInPix's avatar
Thank you so much !
celestialprincess101's avatar
Hi there :wave: I've featured your wonderful work in my journal this week!!!! :iconheartflower: :iconsun--plz: :iconsparklyroseplz: :iconblueheartplz:

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LiveInPix's avatar
Thanks a lot, I truly appreciate ! :strip:
gilderic's avatar
Beautiful landscape
LiveInPix's avatar
Merci beaucoup !
Halomax21's avatar
ah ahhhhh foto talmente bella..che... mi viene voglia di farne un quadro!! ( con il permesso dell'autore della foto, sintende ! eh eh ! ) bravissimo
LiveInPix's avatar
Thanks a lot, glad you like it !
diamondaria's avatar
LiveInPix's avatar
Thanks a lot !
diamondaria's avatar
My pleasure :aww:

have a good day!
celestialprincess101's avatar
Hey there! :wave: Your beautiful work has been featured in my first journal for the New Year!

Happy New Year! :heart:

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LiveInPix's avatar
Thanks a lot for adding this one in your beautiful journal !
Happy New Year !
celestialprincess101's avatar
You are very welcome! :heart:
gnohz's avatar
I have a soft spot for pathways, trails etc :D
LiveInPix's avatar
Thanks a lot !
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