Once upon a Cold November- 1.1 Past Sins (ENG)

What's this? Christmas in July? Nope, it's Ouacn in English
Those who read the German version will be familiar with this story. I'm curious if this will increase the readership or not. 

Synopsis: Our story begins in Rivervale, a small town in western Equestria. A young mare is struggling to let go of her past. Little does she she know she is about to face an even greater challenge with higher stakes. The young pony will be forced to decide how far she is prepared to go to protect those she cares about. Will she make the right choice?

Creator notes:
I currently have up to chapter 5 translated. I am mostly writing in German and do all the translating myself. Curiously enough the first few pages were originally written in English until I decided to go with German. 

All characters used are my own. Some cannon characters are mentioned and they will be credited as required.

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