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Hold me tight; stroke my hair,
Kiss my lips and twirl me in mid air.

Call me Luv; watch me pray,
Lock me in your arms and caress away.

Sing me songs; brush my tears,
Just let me clutch and my fears shall disappear.

Recite my jokes; and the silly bed-time stories,
Make me accept and bring back the glory.

Be my hope; the one who always inspires,
As you are the one who my heart desires.

Be my strength; show me light,
Watch the stars be aligned tonight.

Show me reality; make me believe.
Else love is the last thing I shall ever perceive.
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LuvLuvHurts Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2015
Cool story, bro.
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ranbassi Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
^^
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littlenikita Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Artist
... Thanks? xD
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SuchithraRk Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student Writer
beautifully written :)... innocent and endearing
Cheers:)
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:iconlittlenikita:
littlenikita Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student Artist
Awh. Thanks for all your lovely comments - means a lot :)
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SuchithraRk Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student Writer
sure :)
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:iconlittlenikita:
littlenikita Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Artist
:)
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Mierren Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nice
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:iconlittlenikita:
littlenikita Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Artist
Glad you enjoyed it!
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lacesnflowers Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This poems is... I have no words.
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:iconlittlenikita:
littlenikita Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Artist
Is that meant to be a compliment?
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lacesnflowers Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yes. sorry, i didn't express myself well. ^^'
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:iconlittlenikita:
littlenikita Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student Artist
Its okay, thank you ...
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rebelnijamaster Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Writer
I really like the cadence and the flow of this piece. Very nice. Very pretty.
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Obsidian1996 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i really like that, it made me think of my boyfriend. not sure if that was meant to happen but great job
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:iconlittlenikita:
littlenikita Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student Artist
Haha. I wish I knew too, but Thank You.
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Cubedg2 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Great flow to it!
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:iconlittlenikita:
littlenikita Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student Artist
I'm glad you liked it ...
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Ivorylies Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Student Writer
lovely
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:iconlittlenikita:
littlenikita Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student Artist
Thank You.
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NicolaWingedDeity Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I call my bf Luv, you got me there (: :heart:
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cuzzycutegirl Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
looooooooooove! :heart:
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:iconlittlenikita:
littlenikita Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student Artist
... Thank You.
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ArcoIris-Gato Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah this is a lovely poem! :heart:
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:iconlittlenikita:
littlenikita Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student Artist
I'm glad you liked it.
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ArcoIris-Gato Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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Juuria66 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's certainly very sweet. The last line was a very good way to end it. I will say sometimes the rhymes did seem a bit forced, but still, overall it's a lovely little piece on romance. :)
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littlenikita Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student Artist
Thanks.
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Stellevato Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I believe some parts you were trying so hard to make it rhyme that it just ended up not making sense, or sounding odd. I find myself wishing you would put a metaphor or two in it to make it a little more attention grabbing. But otherwise, it is very cute.
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littlenikita Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student Artist
Yeah -- I should .. edit it
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Fleeting-Epiphany Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
-Just advice-
its a cute/good piece...but a little too, luvy-dovy. (depression been my pup) not sure what that means?
i do like your rhymes however.
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littlenikita Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student Artist
Yeah, I agree -- some parts I am unsure of myself :\
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Fleeting-Epiphany Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
trust me...i have the same problem.
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Fleeting-Epiphany Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
there is nothing wrong with writing about your emotions and i don't think that it's sappy or cheesy at all. just offering advice.
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littlenikita Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student Artist
Lol. No no. I didn't take it as an offending thing or any of that sort! I am just saying that after writing that, I feel weird since I don't like cheesy things xD Its too ... much of a PDA? Haha. But nonetheless, I am glad you liked the poem!
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Fleeting-Epiphany Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
no prob.
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