hello Mr jackson
Moby - Wispering wind 
Don't know what's the most grasping: the elegant eyes, the clenched hand, the blue legs or the shiny feet

i rather like the background color. a design might help but isnt necessary. the front leg looks a little mishapen because it presses against the back leg and then the seat...perhaps sit forward an inch? the pose works very well otherwise and the color is nicely balanced, except for the chair. its too red and contrasty to go with the sublety of the rest. the chair gets attention by being viewed from the side. it should be turned to the model's right enough that in this same pose you only see a frontal, flat, view. the expression and hand is wonderful but it doesnt become a focus, being too far away. the stool can be lit so that its hard shadows go away and the black leather covered with a lighter something or other...point is that if you can eliminate the hard contrast in the stool, your dark hair and eyes will play a stronger part, all else the same.
btw im a fan of Maryla rodowicz and all songs written by agnieszka osiecka. if you have any high recommendations musically im open to it!
btw im a fan of Maryla rodowicz and all songs written by agnieszka osiecka. if you have any high recommendations musically im open to it!
do you have any close-ups of your face? That's a great expression and i love the hand in there as well.
I actually liked the other picture with the chair better (fashion and the fantasy) because of the posture, but this one's amazing as well. It's more relaxed, and it makes me think of a couple breaking up - not a bad and one sided break-up, but a break up that is inevitable and mutual. The eyes look sad and the body language a little hesitant. It's beautiful.
ugh... wciąż i wciąż zachwycasz.... 
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nie mogę wyjść ze zdumienia.. skąd biorą siętak piękne kobiety?

The square crop was the correct choice for this photograph and keeps the viewer's attention exactly where it should be. There is actually quite a lot to observe in this photograph through its simple concepts and deserves a good long look from anyone who comes across it.
All in all, this is a superb portrait and every element within it works together very harmoniously.
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