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made in paint tool SAI
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The-Smol-Bean Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
first off, i think the shine on the hair is WAY too much, and it's also kind of inconsistent. it's normally forms a short of general ring shape around the head, getting bigger, brighter, smaller, darker, etc. as depending on where the light source is. the shine should also be kind of similar to the base color. the light also shouldn't be that bright and obvious. it's most visible around the hair, but it also shows on the skin. again, know where the light source is. draw an imaginary one if you have to. i think an okay way to fix this is to just change the modes to overlay and divide maybe. you can also just lower the opacity, or you can go with both.

also, i think the shape of the head/face is a little weird. what i normally see is that the area where the eyes are ends up getting a little indented (try looking at some other people's pictures to know what i'm talking about), but in this drawing, the part with the eyes is actually kind of extending out.  a good way to check for mistakes in a drawing is to just flip it horizontally. it's easier to see them than if you just look at it normally the whole time.
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LittleAristicArtist Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you, I felt as if this drawing did not come out as well as I hoped.
I am kinda tired, I do not have the full version of Paint tool SAI so I sadly am not able to go back and fix the mistakes.

but I will take your words to heart for my next drawings.

thank you so much for taking your time to critique my drawing.

(this is not my normal style, but I kine like to play around a bit with light and shadow)
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The-Smol-Bean Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem!

if you want a good program that you can get for free, i really like MediBang Paint Pro. i can't say whether or not it's better than Paint Tool SAI, but i've seen a lot of really good art made with that program and it's completely free.
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LittleAristicArtist Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok, I will try it, I normally use Adobe Illustrator but decided to try and use PT SAI
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