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distorted feather

By lisarime
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macro shot of a feather... aww. there must be broken wings out there~

broken wings out there... by nari-me


Whoa, my first Daily Deviation!! Can't believe it yet. Thank you so much guys, especially k-i-mm-i-e and MarcosRodriguez for suggesting and featuring my work!


Please consider looking at one of my recent works too :la:

Fu Bao by nari-me Aderlass by nari-me Wassertropfenstudie by nari-me summerberrilicious by nari-me Week [10] - all the small things by nari-me Fina by nari-me 
Image details
Image size
4288x2848px 5.69 MB
Shutter Speed
1/1600 second
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
Date Taken
Dec 1, 2012, 12:08:00 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

For sure that's great photo. It really catches people's eyes and in some way is kinda abstract.

It hasn't got any disturbing elements and composition is really well made but I think that maybe square one would be even better for this shoot, however, I could be wrong one.

There's not a lot of colours but it's good because it emphasise simplicity in this photo.

I admire you for making such amazing depht of field. It ends in really good moment not giving impression of fuzzy picture I belive it was the hardest part.

Everything in this picture is wonderful and you showed real skills. You have power to make something common into extraordinary thing.
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thank you very much for this amazing critique! I really love it ♥
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You're welcome. It was first time I written one :) Anyway I hope I wasn't too chaotic :aww:
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no, it's just awesome :3
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Awesome is your photography :aww:
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

In short: I love this piece! It is just attention grabbing, easy to look at and 'explore' visually, and I haven't seen a similar photos before which always makes a photo that much more fantastic.

The tones in the photo blend very well - there is no awkward parts in the photograph anywhere in my opinion. The fact that it goes from the pale yellow to the deep dark purple is not something I would have liked mentally but seeing it here defiantly changes my mind and it really works wonderfully. It's just gorgeous.

How the feather's are broken up and going in every which way gives it a sense of movement and leaves the viewer taken the time to follow each separate section.

My only critique for this piece is to possibly have dropped the ISO, there are small little sections where I can see noise (If I look close), and since you were at a high shutter speed then the possibility of dropping the ISO and reducing the noise even further was there, however that is honestly me just trying to find something to be picky about.

If I was just browsing I would have never noticed the noise but because I'm here specifically to critique the piece for #TheCritiquable I wanted to look at every single aspect and see if there was anything you could improved on this piece.

Overall it is gorgeous - I will be clicking favorite as soon as I send this. Fantastic job capturing this gorgeous photo - I cannot wait to see more from you!
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Gah, I didn't expect so much appreciation *o* thank you a million times! Only thing to say: ISO is already at 200 lol ;)
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Yeah I had seen that - so it was pretty low already, but I think it may have looked a bit better if the ISO was at 100 and the shutter speed was a bit lower to compensate for the darkness of a lower ISO, but like I said that was me being picky =P

It really doesn't look noisy - I had to get close to the screen to see it =P
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Haha okay then xD
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Beautiful work! Congratulations on the DD! :iconflowerheartplz:

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So simple but beautiful.
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Fantastic shooting. Well done on the DD. Thanks for sharing.
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thank you very much c:
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Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :love: by CookiemagiK
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thank you very much :)
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My pleasure! Cuddling Practice by TheHugClub
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:clap::clap::clap: Congrats on the DD! :clap::clap::clap:
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I love the smokey illusion. Nice work and congratulations on your DD!
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Thank you very much :)
nipchen's avatar
stunning photograph! well deserved DD :aww:
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thanks a lot! :D
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