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I found myself looking up a mountain
Streching up to the heavans above
I took a single step foreward
Begining to acend
The air is cold but I push on
My breath is short but I continue on
It makes the summit even more beautiful
I can reach out to the coulds and hold them
My fingertips move through the air
Playing a symphony in the sky
Each melody I dedicate to you
For you are the reason that I forge ahead
And as I look down from the heavens above
My eyes search for you
I want to bring you up with me
And let you make music all your own
Pulling you away from where you are now
To allow you to feel as I did up there
For this is where you belong
This particular poem came to me when I was on a hike this weekend and found myself two and a half miles above sea level. The air is so thin I had trbule making it up but I continued to push on. I dedicate this poem to someone special to me. I will no list a name to avoid complications. That person will know who they are when it's read
Curucar Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2007  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Vunderful! I love how the imagery (sp?) and metaphores blend to create a picture within the bigger picture.
LionheartX042 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2007 I'm all embarrased. Thanks ^.^
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