Episode 2 is here
. Remember, this isn't here to hurt it's here to help in a bit of a funny fashion made for humor to make it easier to understand. I'm making it more fun to learn.
You suck at writing when: Your characters monologue about how much their lives suck. "I swear, I'll never get a girlfriend, I'll never get a job, I'll NEVER get a house, and I never will get anything done. My life sucks, my life absolutely sucks." Better example: Just skip the monologues and move on.
You suck at writing when: Your characters make unjustifiable actions. "I'll go get us mcdonalds!" He excitedly said jumping up and down and clapping. BETTER EXAMPLE: "I'll go get us McDonalds." He said helpfully.
You suck at writing when: You have no direction of plot or anything driving the story forward. Jonny Awesome was looking at the dials on the car while driving on the road and noticed he was going too fast. We cut back to our main characters on the train. Better example: IF THEY M