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Brightness, depth, colour, sky--
I give my life to them
upon the pyre of time.

The fire burns, I smile gleefully,
like a child who knows the ways of the trees,
and of the moon, and of the summer stars,
and knows that all is well.
I relish my own burning and the flame.
Life, death, beauty.
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LoriD55 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2005
Lovely words you write. The cleansing of the soul :)
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lilymaid7 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2005   Writer
Thank you. I'm very glad you liked them. :)

That's a good thing for a poem to be.
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nikan2 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2004
very beautiful.....
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lilymaid7 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2004   Writer
thank you. :)
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annaa Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2004
Such beautiful purefying piece :worship:

*...I relish my own burning and the flame..* WOnderful:!:

Love how you part the burning and the flame by the "-and the-" keeping them different

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lilymaid7 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2004   Writer
Thank you ever so much. :)
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