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It's a cute drawing. But the white part of the character hurts my eyes, maybe you can try adding a little bit of brown or black to it s...

by Malartz

It is well done. The line art is clear and flowing. Her hairstyle is cute. The cat theme is good. I can't tell if the thing in her mout...


I like their expressions. It's easy to tell what emotion they all have. Your line art could be smoother and flow more. You can practice...


Based on this sketch, I believe that you are underrated. Your lines flow nice. Your anatomy is great. I'm trying to pick one thing that...


Your anatomy is well done. The color pallet is also easy to look at and beautiful. The design of the character is interesting. It's a g...


Your colors are very pretty. The rocks and sand have good detail on them. With drawing the ocean, the waves are all shaped in a flowing...

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SawuScimitar74 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2018
Happy late Birthday! Hope it was a good one! :D
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birthdays Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2018
:woohoo: :party: :iconcakelickplz: !!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!! :iconcakelickplz: :party: :woohoo:

It's April 8th which means it's that time of the year again and your special day is here! We hope you have an awesome day with lots of birthday fun, gifts, happiness and most definitely, lots of cake! Here's to another year!

Many well wishes and love from your friendly birthdays team :love:

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Annaivri Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy birthday! Cake by Sinister-Starfeesh
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JJJMadness Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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3wyl Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello! :wave:

:iconprojectcomment: has been an active group for more than 8 years to help support artists like you, so welcome to our group! :heart:

Our front page lists projects you are free to jump into whenever you like! We also have a Discord server, if you want to hang out in a social and fun place, chat about art, give and get feedback, participate in fun events, and more! :eager:

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Spare :points:? We'd appreciate any/all donations made to CommentOutreach. All points will be used as prizes for ongoing projects to inspire and motivate members to interact with each other in the DeviantArt community. :love:

Overall, we hope you have an awesome time in our group! If you have any thoughts, suggestions, concerns, etc. please don't hesitate to send us a note! :typerhappy:
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Futumbo Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just stopping by to say "hi", LL!
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LightningLuniver Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2017  Student General Artist
Hello~ ^-^
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birthdays Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2017
:woohoo: :party: :iconcakelickplz: !!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!! :iconcakelickplz: :party: :woohoo:

It's April 8th which means it's that time of the year again and your special day is here! We hope you have an awesome day with lots of birthday fun, gifts, happiness and most definitely, lots of cake! Here's to another year!

Many well wishes and love from your friendly birthdays team :love:

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Jasperinity Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2017
Happy birthday! :D
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