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Lumic4 - Lum and Light - Lead of the forest

It's time to share the panel 2 of  MLP - Timey Wimey page42
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Writer and story-board by :iconbharb: / Lum
Vector drawing and compositing by :iconlight262: / Light

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manders123's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Wow! So cool! I like how there's some use of motion going on here like Twilight Sparkle is running and her mane and tail are flowing, and same goes for Applejack and Rarity also. It looks like Pinkie Pie is jumping in the back, and the Pegasus ponies Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are flying with there wings in motion. For some reason, the way you drew this picture looks like the shows art style a bit, but with shadows, and less brightness to the colours. The background is well done, especially that there is no outlines surrounding it, like how its outlined with a colour, then coloured in with the same outline colour, and there are some details added as well.
cogwheelbrain's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Once of the things I enjoy about your work is the fluidness of the characters.

1) your characters 'move' in ways that I'm not used to seeing from other artists (example, how Twilight is running; how her tail and mane are flowing and her right-front leg is curled as she runs). This is exciting and fun and gives the images life.

2) The expressions and general pony art is very reminiscent of the art from the show to me; not that it's just vector art, but rather it was very meticulously studied and copied from the show's art. The effort shows.

3) Background art - I'm quite impressed. You appear to have a set pallet for specific scenes and stick with that pallet. Which is good; no un-needed colors thrown in for no real reason.

4) Shading and lighting - well managed; not just piled on. However, I do have to say, their faces are a bit more illuminated than everything else - I'm assuming this was in purpose and it's not bad, but it doesn't do all that much for me.

Overall, I think you have a good set of technical skills and a good eye for composition. The image is balanced and there is easily recognizable motion implied in the scene.

If I have to list something wrong, or at least something I feel could be better, I would have to say Rainbow's face and expression seems slightly off; I think it's specifically her smile. I dunno, maybe it's just too narrow and tight? Otherwise, I don't have anything really wrong to list here. As a standalone piece it meets that goals that I believe you were trying to meet; it tells the story that is needed for this scene in your overall story.

Good job.
Light262's avatar
Thank a lot for your critique! ^^
It's a pleasure to have your opinion of my creation!
It was  new challenge for me to create a transition between a sundown and a forest ambiance with color and light.
I takes a great pleasure to work meticulously on each pages and illustrations with several levels of reading of the creation!

ToxicGhost58's avatar
This would make a good cover page!
SonicTAlicorn's avatar
So beautiful! :03
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Sol-R's avatar
I love everything about this ohmygosh /)^-^(\ The lighting is amazing!! And Twilight's face ^3^
SagSaint's avatar
I love it! Good job!
Sword-of-Grayskull's avatar
This is very well done!  I love the perspective, coloring, light, and shade.
Runoratsu's avatar
Twilight looks SO cute here! <3
That light reminds me to Sein from Ori and the Blind Forest.
Horizon-004's avatar
This needs to be a mod on Steam soon.
Yeah! I want the DE on PC, but Moon Studios is having some problem with this version, I think because adapting something to Windows 10 (the worst OS after Vista IMO) is a real pain.
Horizon-004's avatar
Those are good points.
someone posted this on tumblr and i want to make sure you are ok with that!…
Zekrom-9's avatar
I really want this as a poster! Love 
Plezzex's avatar
I have no words.
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NicolasDominique's avatar
Yes, it's time. Lovely work :)
233757's avatar
Awesome, really!Clap 
DeJiKo07's avatar
Awesome work! :)
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