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Heh~ here's chapter 1!!! 👾



( A/N: Off we go to see the wizard!)

We walked towards the small apartment complex. I walked through the narrow hallway, the lights flickering gave everything a spooky affect. Seto followed close behind me making Yuki's constant meowing loud and annoying. We got t to the end of the hall. To door 39. I took the key out my bag and jammed it into the lock. I was locked out. AGAIN. "This is were you live?" Asked Seto. "Yeah... And we're stuck out side." I paused and sighed. "Isn't this just lovely?" I looked up at Seto. I finally took out my phone and called the manger of this building. "Hello this is Cassie. Manger of complex 12." Came a tiered irritated voice. " eh, hi. It's (Y/N)" I muttered. "Lemme guess your door Is freakin stuck again? And you need to help this poor helpless animal that you found on the street?" She said in a rude manner. "Yeah, how did ya know?" I asked. "Just a lucky guess because it's not like that happens every single day." Came a very, very irritated and sarcastic voice. "Kick it down." She suggested. "Because I'm going to bed goodbye!" "B-but-" I was cut off by beep, beep, beep. "Heh... We're going to have to kick the door down..." I said giving a worried smile to Seto.

*****AMAZING TIMESKIP**********************************************************************

After what seemed hours off swing at the door and trying to unlock it I found a paper clip and lock picked into my own house. "Gah~ I hate Cassie!" I exclaimed as I threw my bag on the couch. "Heh... She's the manger?" Seto looked at me.  "Yeah... Would you lie some tea?" I asked. "Sure!" He seemed to be happy. "How are you not exhausted?" I stared at him with a confused face. "Oh, it's really nothing compared to my work." "Is that so? *sigh* you can sit..." I said gesturing to the couch.


Yeah that all I got for now!
Thanks fur reading~!
And that ladies and gentle men is all I got.

Enjoy~!

Seto =Jin
You=Seto
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Crazyj85 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
I see that you improved a lot and you also have your own style of writing(or typing whatever fits). Very interesting indeed. I can see that more details have been added to help the reader picture the area that the characters are in. Very good.
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LifelessQ Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~!
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