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the old citadel
echoes with birdsong –
a green forest
One of my older haiku. I'm told this has a "classic" Japanese feel and structure.

And also one of the rare instances when I like the sound of the Polish version of this poem way more than the English translation. Not entirely sure why.

Written after a walk through the Poznan Citadel.
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011   Writer
It's very evocative. I feel like I am actually there as I read this.
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful :)
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