I tried a different style... how does it look? :3 ♥
The lines look a little bit blurry, and the color of the hoof in the air sorta blends in with the color of the hair. Maybe you can straiten up the lines a little, and use a different shade of color for the hooves and/or hair. Otherwise, it looks cute~
Sorry but the Mane has the same color as the Hooves. But thank you for your Critique! This was my first time drawing in Paint Tool SAI. So you can't really blame me for that xDD ♥ Btw, I haven't used lines. I just used Colors and drew it "freehand" I tried making it look "fluffy" but I guess I have to learn. ^^ The funny thing is that I am better in drawing Mangas xD ^^ ♥
I used to use Paint Tool Sai, and I actually once drew in that same style. It is hard. The funny thing is to me, I can't draw in the manga style. But for your start, it was way better than what my drawing was XD [I don't have the drawing anymore, it was on my old computer ;-;]
^^ I think I will go back to my old Style. It looked way better I think. But I was tired of using MS Paint you know xD. I will practice now. So... I won't answer that much anymore ^^ ♥
I have this one! But I don't use it... Maybe I should...