Murphy's Tales Arc 1 Page 1

OK, i said i would do my last one but i still had some time so here is the critique. First comic, it looks really good with all the details that you have put into it.
1. Vision: The vision looks good how you put all the work into it.
2. Originality: The originality was good as it is your own OC`s and it started with suspense for the reader to continue reading.
3. Technique: the technique looks good as it has good shading and good details for each of the frames in the comic page.
4. Impact: the impact is good as it had many things that make people want to continue reading it.
In conclusion it was a good comic page and i thought that the details were good.
Good luck and i will be up to date with the comic. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>