you weren't too harsh at all!!

and a lot of the bad things were some i was already partially aware of, so i'll keep in mind what you said and then do better next time ^u^

the lines I ended up going with for the moving figure were actually just a sketch, and I could easily go back over the sketches with colors other than black for the outline... thanks for saying that! i wasn't sure how different they looked, so now i know to go with a more consistent type of line-art. and the general movement of the figure in the foreground did come out a little awkward, so i may fix that up as well. 

thanks! i really liked coming up with a color scheme for this piece~ the background was my favorite part. 

Aww!!! What a cute and fun way to draw this adopt you bought from me!! You really make this design look so lovely, and the name Velinda suits her perfectly!! Awesome work!!    

Got it! Thank you so much, the adopt is all yours

Yes these are still open!! Thank you for the interest, I've set up a commissions option for you on my profile (it's titled "100 point adopt")!