and a lot of the bad things were some i was already partially aware of, so i'll keep in mind what you said and then do better next time ^u^
the lines I ended up going with for the moving figure were actually just a sketch, and I could easily go back over the sketches with colors other than black for the outline... thanks for saying that! i wasn't sure how different they looked, so now i know to go with a more consistent type of line-art. and the general movement of the figure in the foreground did come out a little awkward, so i may fix that up as well.
thanks! i really liked coming up with a color scheme for this piece~ the background was my favorite part.