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Looks like I was wrong about what she drank. Another fascinating installment of Victoria's experience as she studies this culture from within. I forgot to mention in my comments to part 1 but great job with the First-Person POV. It's difficult to do well and you do an exceptional job with it. I hope to see more first-person POVs from you.
While still a story involving masters, mistresses, and slaves, the relationships are very sweet. I suspect dynamic between Victoria and 'Thun are not the typical M/s relationships on Erdan, and I can't help how Victoria's story might be different had someone else won her at auction. To be honest, I was hoping ownership of her would be won by Lady Keleka.
Super engaging story, Leilanz. Thank you for sharing!
While still a story involving masters, mistresses, and slaves, the relationships are very sweet. I suspect dynamic between Victoria and 'Thun are not the typical M/s relationships on Erdan, and I can't help how Victoria's story might be different had someone else won her at auction. To be honest, I was hoping ownership of her would be won by Lady Keleka.
Super engaging story, Leilanz. Thank you for sharing!